Just found this and really enjoyed chuckling away imagining our team's reaction to Gemcity smut about them.

I soooooo miss our duo as a duo!

Hahaha... that was great :D lol

darn

Hilarious, well-written, and great characterization. :-)

so funny, I loved it!

Lol I loved this. I definitely chuckled. Keep up the great work!

Hahaha, oh I loved this! I seriously couldn't stop laughing after "moist folds". And of course Abby prefers her smut, smutty. lol. Thanks for the fantastic read,

Kar, xx

Nice ficlet.

It's well written, and I can just imagine the scene happening on the show. If only it would...-sigh-

Anyways, good job.

Oh, Timmy's gonna get it...hm maybe in a smutty way hint hint

Okay, I know you wrote this a long time ago. But I HAD to drop a review. This is hilarious. I could seriously hear every single character saying the lines you gave them, and I actually died at the "MOIST FOLDS?" part. And Tony reading the scene from the book out loud like we know he'd do, and Abby's, "I'm trying to save your life here, Timmy!" were all great. Nothing but love. : )

*absolutely dies of laughter*

Oh god. This was too hilarious.

"You made Tommy and Lisa get it on! Twice in one scene! Over four pages! With extensive descriptive flair!”

So Abby. When I read the summary I nearly died.

THANK YOU.

This is so funny!

Lol, 'moist folds'! XD

I love the summary!

Haha! Ziva brought her knife to kill McGee!

Great, great, GREAT job! It's so hilarious!

ahahahahaha could not stop laughing

*faves*

Hah. Practically ROTFL! I love stories that include McGee's books. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

That was incredibly well written. Very funny.