wow! nice job!

ah, see now you gotta do a sequel. Thats just to cute and too short

Aw, the end nearly had me bawling like a baby. It was heartwarming! And I loved how you used Logan as, well, the "pusher-forwarder" Hahaha, :P

aww! that was awesome! I loved it! :D green is way better than blue!

Aw, I love it! :') My eyes are watering!

So beautiful, as all your writing is. You seem to impeccably capture the characters and know what's in and on their hearts. Wow.

So yeah, I'm like, officially your #1 fan. lol :)

Can't wait to read more of your writing!

~Julz!*

aww. so sad :(, but really cute and well written. love it!

Absolutely loved it, Erika! Amazing story! I just fell in love with the last sentence! _ Ahh can't wait for "Chasing Zoey"! Anyways great story, hope to see more updates for your others stories soon.

-Jo

Your story was great. I really like how you incorporated the theme. I also liked how you put Logan in there. You did a really great job with your story.

Only one thing. At the end, Zoey say four words not three.

Loved it!

And thats a great connection with Zoey's dress color and their eyes and such.

Now i really want Zoey's dress to be green D haha\

Good job Erika! it was a great one-shot.

Now i'm even more excited for Chasing Zoey! D

Jess

Aww great story!

I freaking can't wait for Chasing Zoey.

So sad it's almost over though...

But anyways, I loved this!

Looking forward to the update of It Takes Two. *hint, hint* :)

Aw, this was so cute! I really loved it! You have a passion for writing, and I kind of understand why she missed green. Wonderful!

Aw.

Nice little oneshot.

Update all your other stuff ASAP.

Loved it.

I love green.

Xx Tohru x Seraphina xX