At first when I started reading this I was REALLY confused... ( - )... But then when you think of it all as a series of Ichigo's dreams then I guess it all makes sense. The second story and the third one are my favorites Awesome writing! :D

This was a seriously awesome little series thing. You are definitely an unusual, but kick-ass writer.

Has anyone ever told you that you write really different, really awesome fanfiction?

WHOOOOOAAAAAA...my mind just exploded. That was a seriously awesome paradox twist thing you have going there.

Really well written and I'll admit these dreams had me going, pretty confusing. But I have to say it was a good story overall.

wow.. nicely done

Let me start off by saying that you write beautifully. I am, in no way, critisizing your work here, and I am certainly not implying that I didn't enjoy reading this. The fact that I feel compelled to write a review to this speaks volumes, and is more a matter of me struggling to understand your point of view when writing them than to offer any critique.

These chapters feel... disjointed, almost as if you kept changing your mind when writing them. I understand completely that that was the idea, with Ichigo shifting from dream to dream, but I was expecting a bit more from the ending. Something to link them all together- like a really important event that spurred these dreams into being and somehow make them all tie in and make a creepy bit of sense. Don't get me wrong, I know that dreams don't all make sense, but I find it a bit odd that you would choose to write a story based on nothing but the odd scenarios you have here. I almost feel as if they would have been better off as one-shots.

The second chapter was my absolute favorite, and sent my mind whirling in an effort to comprehend the meaning that you had. The writing was superb. I loved each of the stories enough to want to read more, even though the endings were all perfect, but again, I can't help but think that they would have been better off as one-shots. They don't really get enough credit as they are for simply being facets of a non-sensical dreamworld without any real meaning or consequence. I kept thinking that they were all going to add up to an important event that we hadn't been let in on yet, and the real ending left me a bit dissatisfied.

Anywho, please don't think that I thought badly of this story or any of its parts- the thought put into it was amazing, and I hope to see more like it in the future. Well done, and thank you for writing it.

Wow I think my head just spun around...the way you write is...amazing.

This story made me pee.

:D

Gosh, that was so... terrifying. You should consider being a sci-fi writer. Or something. It kind of makes sense now (though not really). So, is Tite Kubo an Ichigo Kurosaki, too?

I hope you update sometime (soon). This was really amazing.

OK... What the hell is going on! I'm confused as hell... Maybe I should just read the next chapter... Yeah, that sounds like an idea *goes read*

Freakin' amazing not to mention deeply creepy. I can't wait to read more (hopefully Ichigo in SS?)

O... *munches popcorn*

Lol, 1138. X)

Very very good. First person writing genius. At first, I thought it was truly a dream and then as it went on, I thought someone had interferred with time itself. I do like the way you've written it. It gives a different glimpse at the situation when Rukia and Ichigo first met, and if something like this was ever to happen to Ichigo, I'm sure this would be his exact thoughts.

It was fun reading this. Very captivating. It kept me glued to the story. I did find only a few mistakes, but they were mostly words.

Like in your first line:

/Ever had one of those days? When it seemed like you were still in a dream but nothing could wake you up? And, after a point, things got so crazy you knew it could only be real and you weren't even sure you if were imagining things?/

The last sentence, switch around you and if. I only saw maybe two more errors like this through out the whole story. Everything else looks really good.

Great work Adam! You and Laurie enjoy challenging yourselves, ne? That's good. Both of you are imaginative and creative writing genuises who could spit out a story in two days time. It was really good. :)

Oh you got to continue this! Great story i wonder what would Rukia react when ichigo take an exam in the 13th division!

I really hope ichigo will be aware at himself in society! Update asap i'll wait!