noooooo, why?
because they died?
this is so sad

Yeah, old story is old; I'm reviewing as part of an effort to review every horror story in this category. Seriously.

And oh, Saba, are the early TMM horror fics bad! This fic left me lukewarm, but just reading a story by someone with decent grammar is a breath of fresh air, believe me.

The reason I'm not too hot on this fic, I think, is because you spend a lot of time on how sad everybody is about Ichigo, rather than focusing on the fractured relationship between Kish and Pai that is, in my opinion, the most interesting thing in the story. Kish, in particular, is so busy feeling sad about Ichigo that he doesn't have time to feel betrayed by his friend, and I think that hurts the story as a whole. I mean, don't get me wrong, this isn't bad, but I would have liked, say, a fight scene between Kish and Pai where they'd get a chance to air out their issues.

İYEEEE! *screams* (oh,and,why its ening seemed me as romeo and juliet? is that just me?)

I LOVE IT!

Aww, so sad

Anway you would be able to talk to me on my fourms?

*sniff* *sniff* even though *sniff* I don't like Ichigo-san *sniff* that much...that was so sweet! The pain Kisshu felt especially * sniff* priceless and Pai played a great role *sniff* you know that word *sniff* teleport? *sniff* I forgot to use *sniff* it in my *sniff* story so instead *sniff, grabs tissue* I put 'zapped' lol *sniff*

what does aishiteru mean

Pai is so coldhearted!

Update soon kay?

*stunned* Now THIS is an amazing story!

AW! that was SO sad Por Ichigo and Kish. Mean PAI!

How horribly sad! *sobs in a dark corner*

The evil Pai part and Kisshu dying was what got me tearing up. So sad... ;-;

This was really sad story. And I loved every bit for it! It just suited so perefectly...

Omfg... NOW I'M DEPRESSED!

O.O Ok, this is like, the BEST story you've written! So FAR... -

Sometimes i wonder how people write so good...