Reviews for I Love You Too Much |
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BarbieGirl82 chapter 1 . 3/19 That's a cute story and well written though. I found a few minor errors though. I can't imagine gohan cheating on videl. Its too out of character for him. |
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 10/27/2019 lol videl hissing saying to sayianman i should have trusted my nerd boy husband is just too loyal to our marriage to cheat on me with what your mom will do to her son if you ever cheated on me he he i am going to tell chichi what lime has been doing gohan saying to videl no as much as i don't like lime right now i don't want mom going to prison for murder |
videl4545 chapter 1 . 5/22/2019 it was a really good story |
MagicalBlueNeko chapter 1 . 1/16/2018 Aww Kawai |
Thabi chapter 1 . 4/12/2017 Totally love the story especially the ending |
Marocrache chapter 1 . 4/15/2015 Badabababaaa im lovin it |
hayley chapter 1 . 10/20/2012 more dealtails |
Xxsilver-dragonnessxX chapter 1 . 5/26/2010 Love the story!... and you're completely right, Gohan would never cheat on Videl! (i love happy endings) |
Itachi's apprentice chapter 1 . 12/3/2009 Great work, I like how you made Lime the bad guy(girl). Gohan would never cheat on Videl. Even Vegeta wouldn't bail on Bulma for crying out loud. I saw one(didn't read) where the Sumary was that Vegeta, cheats on Bulma with Videl. yeah you heard right. |
Michael chapter 1 . 5/4/2009 Why would Lime work at capsule corp? She's a hill billy cowboy kind of girl...and i think she's like 4 years younger than Son Gohan. You should have put in like Angela or Erasa, that'd make more sense. btw Gohan lives next to his mom's house see the episode grand daughter pan when trunks visits Goku's house to look for Goten? |
chimney leaf chapter 1 . 4/29/2008 I'm a sucker for a happy ending too. |
Hyrulian Saiyajin chapter 1 . 4/27/2008 I don't normally care for the GohanXVidel pairing, but I really liked this! And I completely understand your venting, I've gotten a little sick of people writing 30 different oneshots about how my favorite couple split up. Good luck with your other fic! |
jdeppgirl4 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008 It was a pretty good oneshot. My favorite part though was your venting at the end. "Even Vegeta wouldn't bail on Bulma for crying out loud." Yep, loved it. |
stargazer1004 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008 I knew you didn't have it in you to break Gohan and Videl up. Again, yet another great story! Keep up the good work and good luck on your writer's block. |
Ms. Videl Son chapter 1 . 4/27/2008 I debated whether or not I wanted to read this at all because I hate, hate, HATE stories that involve adultery, but I'm glad I chanced it. It's nice to see that someone out there still believes in marriage/love/all that good stuff. Also, if dbz-lover91 hasn't reviewed you yet, expect her to do so soon and rave happily about how you made Lime out to be the bad guy, hehe. Call it a prediction. Just remember to show, not tell while you're writing, 'kay? MVS |