Reviews for How to Build a Fire |
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Inufan10 chapter 4 . 11/13/2014 Omg I'm so into this story that I didn't even realize what time it was. I'm just sitting and reading while drinking my coffee and one look at the time gave me a heart attack. This is one awesome story, I love it. |
BG224 chapter 21 . 2/26/2011 please...i love this story so much...UPDATE! the irony of everyhitng, the predicaments, i love it all ! especially how inuyasha hates dogs theyre relationship is finally coming alone, ya gotta update ! for the fans ! PLEASEEE! |
InuYasha-Breeze chapter 20 . 9/19/2010 * Clicks Story Alert.* :) |
InuYasha-Breeze chapter 7 . 7/29/2010 I would love for InuYasha to be my teacher! he is freaking hilarious at the things he writes on the board i crack up each time! XD anyways... Great story by the way. we need more perverted scenes. Trust me this keeps your viewers more interested. I'm not a pervert T_T i'm female! |
inufan424 chapter 21 . 7/18/2010 A twist! Dun-dun-DUN! haha. I loved the chapter, as always. I'm so glad you updated. Made my weekend even MORE awesome, which I didn't know was possible. I mean, what could possibly add to the amazingness of an older sister getting married to the perfect guy for her? And being IN the wedding? I may or may not be boasting about this (the marriage, not the bridesmaid status). The kitchen stuff was very cute. It did make me go "aww"...in my head, because I was also dancing around to some music while I read this. haha. Anyhoo, hope to hear from you again soon! Great work! |
Dark Dream Angel chapter 4 . 7/18/2010 Hehe! Man this story is funny! ;D I'm with you on that one! (I'd rather be home schooled too!) OH! And I liked the whole "Yes, Mr. Takahashi..." pledge thingy. It made me laugh so hard my family all gave me weird looks... though that's nothing too unusual haha! ;D |
SaccharineDreams chapter 17 . 3/26/2010 I decided I'd review this chapter, too. I remembered reading it a long time ago only after I read it again. It was quite amusing-I remember that I was not expecting that volunteer to be so thrilled that there had been a water fight. And of course the InuKag cuteness made me smile. They always seem to be getting into awkward situations... As for positives about this chapter: The characterization and length are excellent, as always. I giggled at InuYasha's dislike of bathing canines, when he in fact is half dog youkai himself. XD For negatives: there's one error that I specifically remember, and that is Sango's glare boring a "whole" in Miroku. The correct word is "hole." Fun fact: For Halloween of '09, I was "Hello Batty." My favorite dish at Thanksgiving? I like them all, to be honest! I will read the next chapter soon! ~Saccharine~ |
SaccharineDreams chapter 16 . 3/26/2010 I'm so glad I re-read this chapter. I think I read it quite some time ago, but something urged me to go back so I could finish reading what you've written so far. I've been taking a break from reviewing...I'm not sure why. As for this chapter: I couldn't help but giggle at Kagome and InuYasha. They're just so...cute! Making this chapter take place three months after the last one is just fine with me, because there -are- plenty of projects to be done over the holidays. For the positives and the negatives: I still enjoy the length of your chapters. They're always the perfect length! I also enjoyed how you mirrored InuYasha and Kagome's thoughts. It was interesting to see how one affected the other, and vice versa. For the negatives, I spotted a few technical errors, but I didn't see anything wrong with the characterization or anything else of the like. Keep up the good work! I will most likely read the next chapter and review now. ~Saccharine~ |
inufan424 chapter 20 . 3/24/2010 Ah! You're back! Hoorah! I've missed this story. You know, this is one of my favorite chapters so far. I love the part where they get closer. And i liked how Inuyasha is finally breaking down, and unable to hide how he feels from her as much anymore. Rin is great. Her bluntness is so entertaining! :) So I hope I get to read more soon! Don't feel bad, I have stories that are almost two years old too and I've hardly touched them in 2 months! D: |
Rinnesuke chapter 15 . 3/15/2010 I totally heart this story! Let me know if you wrote any other stories about Inu-yasha and Kagome, okay? X Renie |
Diamond369 chapter 20 . 3/14/2010 damn for a second i thought she said ti outloud! lol please continue when you get the chance :) |
ShadowDancerLei chapter 19 . 1/25/2010 Ah! This story is awesome! I really like your writing style. I'm looking forward to your next post! |
inufan424 chapter 19 . 11/23/2009 You're alive! haha. I missed this story so much! It's one of my top favorites! (it certainly helps that you actually bother to use good grammar and punctuation...) I'm excited for the next chapter, I love how Inuyasha keeps getting all flustered! Kagome doesn't seem to be very aware of it, but I could be wrong. Oh! And the next dinner with Sesshomaru-are you going to write about that? Or is it just going to be a (humerous?) memory that Kagome looks back on when it's Sunday? Ahh, I just want to keep reading right now! So...welcome back! I hate make-up work, it's a good thing I rarely get so sick I have to stay home. Glad you got all that surgery stuff done with! |
Tipsy-Ink chapter 19 . 11/23/2009 I feel like reviewing in Yoda form lol... short is maybe but awesome it was lol I'm sry my bestfriend has me watching a star wars marathon and I just love Yoda ] awaiting the next update |
InuKag19 chapter 19 . 11/22/2009 omg, u write so gud! please keep writing til u finish the story! :D i love it! :D |