| Reviews for The Lost Elfling |
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   Qorianth Grindelwald chapter 9 . 2/26 You had me crying at the end! |
| RykkiLynnea chapter 9 . 2/11 Very cute story. I only have one, minor, criticism. Anyone who has experienced pain often enough, like you implied Harry/Tegalad did from his time in Voldemort's care, would know that tensing or bracing for a blow will hurt more. One has to actively force their body to relax to lessen the pain (and yes, it would be extremely difficult to do, especially in a torture situation.) However, having supposedly been tortured before and having grown up neglected and at least mildly physically abused as a child, Harry/Tegalad would have already learned this long before becoming an elfling of Middle Earth. Other than that, it was a fairly good story and I very much wish it had been more in depth and novel length so I could have enjoyed it longer. |
| annamccallen chapter 1 . 5/24/2019 This was amazing! |
| JlovesGaara chapter 9 . 12/26/2018 *is crying* fantastic story! |
| thetech chapter 9 . 12/17/2018 what a fuck waste of time reading this drivel |
| loretta537 chapter 9 . 11/26/2017 this was good, but I think I will feel sorry for telegad/harry in a few years. He is a full elf and immortal while everyone around him is mortal. |
| LimeBun chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 Psh, good riddance. I'm more into gay love |
| Funky-Friday chapter 9 . 7/19/2017 You made me cryyyyyyyy! Damn all the feels. I loved it by the way. It was well written and worth being read. Bravo. |
| hdres chapter 9 . 4/18/2017 Very sweet. Thank you for sharing your story. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/13/2017 this is an amazing fan-fiction I really love it thanks! |
| hearagain chapter 9 . 7/5/2016 Loved your crossover. The only thing I wish that you had addressed was why teenaged Harry was acting like an 8 year old no matter what size his elf body was. Nice job weaving him in with the LOTR characters. Thanks for sharing. |
| twinia1 chapter 9 . 1/4/2016 love it, sequel? |
| Amu4ever chapter 6 . 9/13/2015 Hmmm...I would have chosen one route with the hobits. I wonder, if you saw it the same way. Oh and you ignored his wound! He got graced by a rumble! He is hurt. Why wasn't that taken care afterwards? And his wounds from the attack before? He was nearly crushed by an orcs beast for heaven's sake! Don't just ignore that! That's the most annoying thing that keeps happening in action movies. Don't go down that path. But except for that good chapter as always :) (Seriously please do not go down that path.) |
| Amu4ever chapter 4 . 9/13/2015 See no reason to hate it. It's pretty good. |
| Hainbuche chapter 9 . 5/2/2015 das ist wirklich gut geschrieben. ich war den großteil der zeit am heulen. sehr schön :) lg hayne |
