Reviews for Coming Home
glowyrm chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
it's really good. I really enjoy your work.
Elle chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Loved this :D More of your fics soon please
Rita Arabella Black chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Before this is all over you're going to think I'm a stalker-but I've just discovered your work, and I am very impressed. Outstanding narrative, very well organized. Realistic dialog.

RAB
hypercell chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
This was very good. I liked it.
LongLiveOlivera4ever chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
You really are amazing, you know that? I love how you put so much emotion into your writing, like you're really going through it. I like that it sounds like experience, though I can't tell if you've really gone through something like this or not. It's realy good, though. I love it!
dahilsaiyo chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
For a first attempt at a real fafic, this is excellent. I never would have thought it was your first. Honestly, this is much better than many of the ones I have read... and I have read hundreds of fanfics over 8 years.
Mistymist chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Adain really well done and at the risk of repeating myself I will simply say that I really enjoyed this even though its not so much a happy tale as one that shows alot of emotion and family love.

Thanks for sharing.
hannahannah chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
A lovely one-shot, and a very clever tie in of canon and your own ideas. The clock was a great addition.
anna chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This was a very well thought out situation that in reality does happen to many wives of those men who serve the public. Well done. Keep writing.
boostarryeyes chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Wonderfully written. Loved that Harry knew he had to put up a shield charm!
NoReins94 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Wonderful work.
Lizzmeister yo chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
I love your writing style, this really showed how Ginny feels every time that Harry's gone.

I'd have liked it more if it wasn't for my 'hating Ginny' thing, but whatever.

See? I can like (most of) this story, even though it's about Ginny. That definately shows your a good writer.
silverbirch chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
That was good, nicely written.

I do like your rather understated style of writing; it makes it seem so much more real.

I'm looking forward to the next one now!
Loyd1957 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
Actually, I believe you did an extremely wonderful job in describing how Ginny felt during Harry's absence. It is something to think about when your husband is an Auror and when events like that happen. I loved that the characters have matured and we could relate to the feelings described.
Jayd Scarlett chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
real nice, although I would've thought Ginny was used to Harry coming home late by the time James was born.
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