Aw!

This is so cute. Awkward Sasuke is my favorite!

Wow this story was great! I loved it!
Though, Usuratonkachi actually means "thin hammer" which basically means Useless.

How could Naruto mistake kissing for nausea! Poor Sasuke!
But lucky Sasuke...
But, y'know... nausea...?

That was cute.

Hehehehe... Naruto... a totally usuratonkachi :DD

This, this- "Naruto's heart hammered wildly against his chest, not just beating like a crazy drum but singing like a goddamn orchestra."
I don't know why I find it so sweet, maybe because its not just something physical but rather, romantic; or something.

First off, I must say you have one of the greatest Pen Names of all time.

This was an enjoyable fic, well written, funny and really sweet :) Though it was painful to read at times, because I have unappreciated tendency to feel embarrassment for others(this case Sasuke)

Sasuke smirked. "Just so you know, after today there's no way I can stop calling you 'usuratonkachi'."
The kyuubi container sighed heavily. "I understand and I accept my fate."
"And eating before you train…it'll be the death of you."
"Oh I know."
"Sakura and I have warned you many times so it won't be our fault."
"Of course not."
"…You're going to keep doing it, aren't you?"
"Most likely, yes."
"Usuratonkachi," Sasuke shook his head, but the smile that Naruto had been waiting for peeked out.

Omg you remineded agian me why I luv these two! *envelopes them in a bone cracking hug*

Naruto's a moron...

How can he confuse indigestion with a kiss Cx

I can never imagine sasuke crying o_o but red rimmed eyes yes. And hurt expression yes. And naruto being a doofus idiotic usuratonkachi yes. Heartwarming fic!

That was soooo very good. I like not only Naruto's uncertainty, which you portrayed and described and acted out so well, but also his obliviousness. So funny! Who knew kissing could be mistaken for indigestion? lol

I just really like how Naruto was trying to figure out if he liked Sasuke, and the awkwardness, and Naruto's deep thoughts. It made it more realistic than most all SasuNaru oneshots.

Awesome! 0

This was so sweet:) And the emotions and anxieties were so realistic! You have no idea how hard it is to find a good realistic story. It was funny in all the right places and serious when it needed to be, you pulled the whole idea of the story off so well. I actually felt really sorry for Sasuke in your story, not so much because Naruto unintensionally rejected him but becasue he liked Naruto SO much and he was just too emotionally retarded to really portray that to him. The ending was sweet, and i am glad you didn't make them go all out pornstar in this like most authors do in their stories, it was just right:) I will have to go through and read the rest of your stories, and if they are anything like the ones i have already read i am sure i will enjoy myself immensely:D

I loved it ! great story ...

another fic i absolutely loved! please write more about these two:)