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I have read the fanfiction story and I love it you are such a good artist and .All I am saying is please make more stories.

absolutely fantastic. i like SE as well. all i can say on the improvements front is a small bit of spelling and punctuation, but i love your style as it's extremely involving. i apologize if i have offended you, as this was far from being my intention.

This was really good! I think there should be another chapter where Black Star and Tsubaki walk in on them while their kissing though.
- Zanmau rules

omg... I iz scared. wuz not specting dat. dis is meh stupid txtng tlk. :3

"He wants to do that?".. "He wants to do that!".. hahaha Maka-chan is so adorable here :D.. great story! :3 3

This is good. I really like how it ended. You're a good writer.

At the beginning with the moaning I was just like...
So we are beginning at a lemon should have been rated m. Haha good story! SO FLUFF!

We all know what we were thinking at the start

Hey, I really like the story you've started. Can you please write more?

PERFECT FANFIC.
I like how instead of going over board into "THAT",you actually stopped Soul and Maka from doing anything that stupid.I think it is very hard for people to do that but you did it job I would love to see more work of yours in the brings me to this:Can you make a Stein x Reader fnfic?I would love for the story!

Great story

Inthe beginning you tricked me

I love how realistic this seems

Is there anymore to it? i wanna know!