Really a great fanfic!

I loved reading it, read something more about Diwan and things she liked.

You did a great job for putting Diwan her feelings and heart in it.

Love it!

PUPPY! NO! :P

Okay, enough of that and onto the review.

First of all, I really like the line "The swing was still moving in the breeze, the ground around it may be dead but the memories that it has help create will still go on living..." (although it should be "helpled" instead of "has help" and the main point of this fic. And I love the title.

One of the things that bothers about it is the part where Diwan ignores Oslo. Doesn't seem realistic, even if she was detirmined to get to her ship. She would never ignore Oslo seeing as how detirmined she is to show her loyalty/devotion to the Oslo/the Sphere (Also, I'm an Oswan (OsloxDiwan) fan. :P)

Another thing was the way she swung. I don't think she would honestly fly that high (She's a grown women...)...(unless she didn't REALLY fly that high and was just imagining..) I think she would more likely rock back and forth lightly, smiling.

...this is like the longest review I ever bothered to type...wowz...

good story, seems to have an elfen lied (anime series) vibe to it. keep up the good work.

This is good. Better if there were no spelling mistakes, but not bad. HOW in the world did you upload it? FFN won't let me upload anything! But this is a great story. Definitely didn't know Diwan had a heart, much less innocence. _