Aw man I wanted a lemon but it was good

Why man why? I hate this book now, it hurts thinking about this why?!

Bro, wtf?! Author-san so far I declared this fanfic my favourite out of all the other NaruHina fanfics I haver read, this omake has changed my opinion, WHY MAN WHY?!

ottimo capitolo!

Maybe it's because I watched a really messed up and sad anime but that omake where hinata marries kiba so that naruto doesnt become a branch member really messed me up, idk why but it really made me feel sad? Idk how to describe this emotion but it hurts just thinking about it.

only Jiraiya-sama would find a way to make the scene perverted

Bro! Ebisa?! Lololololol that was very funny. I like how ebisu is a very good teacher and character here. In the canon universe and other fanfics ebisu just gets this one scene and then that's it. I'm glad to see a new take on ebisu and everything else. I read a few chapters before deciding if i like this fic. I like this fic and i hope you keep writing more.!

I will hate this book and the author will naruto ends up with sakura

I was honestly so upset with this chapter I didn't want to read any further if it weren't the author's note on the next chapter. If you make an AU of a ship that nobody wants to read it would be supremely helpful if you write Alternate Universe in bold print. Better yet, don't include it in a NaruHina fanfic at all. You're the writer so of course you can do whatever you like with your story, but this chapter really does feel like a betrayal for readers.

Damn... just damn, nice man, I'm almost 11 years late but a great job.

I binge read this in about 2 1/2 days. I loved it, and I'm totally going to try out your book.

That’s it? That’s the entire talk? Kakashi abandons his teammates proving him to be worse than scum and that’s all the talking to he gets? The Hokage is a fucking pussy in your story. Quickly losing respect for this story. The characters are despicable.

I always thought it was pretty shitty of Kakashi to dump Naruto on Ebisu but it makes sense with Sasake facing Gaara but i owuld've thought a shadow clone would have been handy as an alternative.

I guess one of the negatives that come from Hinatas win is that it really inflames the hatred Neji has of the main branch. I hope that Naruto talk no jutsu is able to quell that.

Way to go Hinata.

Canon nothing new