lots of hot stuff ya know like all manga echhi and hotter

The story seems good so far but it really doesn't introduce anyone except Naruto and Sakura. I will give it a shot.

Awesome story can u continue with it some more I need more like this

best story ever!

I am probably the last person to read this lol. Great story, wonder how it would be if the story continued to when Naruto becomes a six path's sage. Just an idea if you ever come back to o another book.

Don’t listen to those bitchy reviews they all just be saskura fans I made my own naruto and Sakura lov story and I only got one bad review but I kept on going

I enjoyed your story, but it was a little disappointing how wimpy naruto seemed at the end. Even normal everyday humans can do phenomenal feats when someone they love is in danger, so seeing naruto get worked over so easily after seeing sakura get stabbed.

You'd think that with another writer, the content would improve. Interestingly enough the writing improved (though it was still sloppy craftsmanship, the syntax was at least correct), but the content was so very annoyingly stupid. Learn a bit about pregnant women before you write about them. At 4 months, most women still aren't showing and if they are it's very little (especially if she's a fitness nut like Sakura 'the ninja' would be). And this back and forth dickering is like listening to a couple of eight year old kids arguing over what to watch on TV.

Married a week... Engaged 2 weeks before that... All this and more if the price is right! YOU WIN! She's now pregnant by at least 2 months! Making this either an immaculate conception or just freaking weird. I thought you were in college when this was written? What were you studying? Let me guess, Pre-med! LOLOLOLOLOL!

What a wimp Naruto is! If he can barely tie Sakura's father (who is a civilian ... Sakura is the first ninja in her family). I don't have much hope for him ever becoming the Hokage! Heck, I don't expect him to survive a geniin attack!

She hadn't kissed him since the genjutsu?! That was like hours ago... Married?! She hasn't even been dating him a month and earlier you wrote that she was 15. C'mon! Of course, maybe you're 12 years old ... I don't really know, that would explain some of this nonsense ... like that stupid sex scene. And what's your fascination with Naruto saying, "Come here." What, is she a dog?! ~jsm

This was embarrassing to even read. However, by reading the lines from Sakura's mom aloud with a lisp and a Brooklyn accent, I had several good laughs. The whole, 'first time,' stuff was so gay that I could actually hear the Village People singing!

Sooooo over the top that it's like cloying syrup. Get a grip.

Naruto and Sakura are parents of 3 genin?! Let's take a moment to consider the ages. The kids will be between 10-13 years old ... meanwhile, Naruto and Sakura are at the most 17! Now, considering normal gestation time and that the kids aren't triplets ... That means that Sakura was no older (and likely less) than an infant! That makes this kind of disgusting and someone needs to be in jail! ~jsm

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