nice story

Hello, Rapid Rabbit Review.

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I like your story but you really need to capitalize on the genius of Artemis Fowl you're making him seem normal.

I love the way you have written you characters! The OCs are hilarious and your spin on Artemis is really interesting. Also, Finn and Jake! Adventure Time! A great sneaky reference. I love the story so far, and are Kris and Holly going to meet soon? I hope so.
Continue being awesome!

Kris has captured my heart. :)
Okay! Next chapter...guh! Oh, thank God there's a sequel.

Uwaaa Arty ;_;

...w...wh...what?
A third of me is saying "Aw, poor Arty"
Another third says "Ha! He deserved it. You go guuurl"
And the last third says "Have I seen this in an OC fanfic? Not yet. Bravo"

I'm so glad I'm reading this after it was completed. Otherwise, I'd be throwing fits, Ms. I 3 cliffhangers

For a second, I was annoyed. Mostly because I'm jealous of Kris who gets asked out by genius boy. (. they're both fictitious but regardless...) But also because there are so many OC stories in which said OC dates a major character and they're all lovely dovey finally and the plot is doomed. But no, you did not disappoint me, good author. And OF COURSE there's no escaping puberty. ;)

I must've had an idiotic smile on my face while reading this.

Oh my gosh, I laughed so hard, I snorted. XD

Okay, favoriting time. I usually don't like OC stories, but when they're THIS entertaining, how could I not.

*mention of Artemis* Me: *bounces excitedly in seat* Kya Artemis! 3 And yay, theres even a gay bff XD

"He-who-must-not-be-teased" Haha I like her already XD