Reviews for When I'm Sleeping
Guest chapter 15 . 4/5
Hasn't there been enough?

YOu know, I can't really remember what I aws going to do with this story but I'm gonna try and wrap it up within 5 chapters...well, around 5 chapters...maybe. I'm leaning towards a happy ending but I still have some evil ideas brewing in my mind so I might scrap that idea and just indulge in a little angst...it's the pain you see, it makes me want to cause misery. lol...ok, review and input is encouraged.

I hate fics that for 20 chapters throw stupid twists and drama some really dumb and painful and give one chapter of happy ending. It's not pleasant or satisfying as a reader. I read the last two chapters but too many accidents, him her and Brooke being selfish when she knew Leyton liked each other from the start so much SHE had them kiss as a dare. It's not only Lucas' fault. What kind of person is Peyton, part of cheating lets the guy take all blame? Peyton WAS her bf and she did betray her not just Lucas. Now they all had their part to blame. But Lucas at least followed his heart. Brooke followed list and Peyton followed the opposite of her heart and ran from it.
Takoh chapter 16 . 7/12/2014
i know its 5 years later, but please finish
libra20 chapter 16 . 7/21/2009
First off, Happy Birthday! I'm glad that you are going to finish this story because I really like it.

Good update. I wonder if Lucas will be able to truly mend Brooke and Peyton's friendship?
kylielink chapter 16 . 7/21/2009
Is peyton going to be ok? good updates
ChloeSianSullivan chapter 16 . 7/21/2009
I love this story,

it's how i'd have liked the show to play out.

without the whole lucas 'loving' brooke thing.

then again if that hadn't happened then there might not have been this many seasons. anyway i love it :D pleasee continue :D :D
bendecida82 chapter 16 . 7/21/2009
I enjoyed... Im so glad Peyton kissed him instead of pulling away. I love Momma Karen doing anything, and I love that Brooke is coming to the hospital. She still loves Peyton, she's just mad.

UD soon!
RJMoonspell4 chapter 16 . 7/21/2009
Good post
lalez chapter 16 . 7/21/2009
happy birthday!

good chapter

keep going
libra20 chapter 15 . 1/26/2009
Good update.
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 15 . 1/26/2009
i loved that he got her smiling and i so loved that she grabbed him at the end and kissed him, i hope we get some happy and in love leyton soon. update soon
RJMoonspell4 chapter 15 . 1/26/2009
Good post.
BrownEyedDreamer86 chapter 15 . 1/26/2009
Awh shucks, i always love a happy ending, now how they get there can be messy and as you put it angsty...as long as they get there..lol update soon...
smc-27 chapter 15 . 1/26/2009
Loved their conversation! Lucas' stalker-ish ways paid off! Very cute though. They seriously need to just not worry about Brooke. Loved it.
libra20 chapter 14 . 10/22/2008
Good update.
trublonde18 chapter 14 . 10/22/2008
Great chapter! UD soon :-)
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