Reviews for Lurking Darkness Volume I
Guest chapter 6 . 6/6
Go fuck yourself. Naruto is such a cocsucking pansy bitch in this. His mother should have been kidnapped and turned into a breeding bitch for Kumo. Stupid dickhead
VanitasTheFool.1 chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
when are you going to start writing the new time flies?
Effusive Quisling chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
Well isn't this just peachy? The evil bastard has targeted Naruto.
dead acount 78934 chapter 3 . 1/7/2011
wow...poor naruto...hes surrounded by idiots...
dead acount 78934 chapter 2 . 1/7/2011
nice...the first chapter wasnt really good but this is amazing...sepiroth?...i know ive heard that somewhere b4...

anyway...you could put wat theyre saying in "quotation marks"...it would help more...
ao3lover101 chapter 7 . 6/19/2009
O.O i love it update!
Sai'mne chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
it's cool but i dont get it
Hakkyou no Yami chapter 6 . 11/9/2008
really interesting, I await your next chapter.
nim istar chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
only problem i see is with your dialogue, its hard to get used to the - over the "".
DarkRavie chapter 5 . 9/30/2008
Great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in your next one.
Bleedndreamz chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Sarutobi is the Sandaime's last name the believed first name of the 3rd hokage is Sasuke Sarutobi
DeltaKyuubi chapter 4 . 9/22/2008
cool story cant wait till you update
DarkRavie chapter 4 . 9/21/2008
Good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next!
captain deoxys chapter 4 . 8/9/2008
Its A good fic, But could you pleas euse quotation marks instead of dashes for dialouge.? It Gets kinda confusing.
ThePizzaManToughtMe chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
Great story. Plz plz plz update soon!
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