Reviews for Lurking Darkness Volume I |
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Guest chapter 6 . 6/6 Go fuck yourself. Naruto is such a cocsucking pansy bitch in this. His mother should have been kidnapped and turned into a breeding bitch for Kumo. Stupid dickhead |
VanitasTheFool.1 chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 when are you going to start writing the new time flies? |
Effusive Quisling chapter 2 . 6/16/2011 Well isn't this just peachy? The evil bastard has targeted Naruto. |
dead acount 78934 chapter 3 . 1/7/2011 wow...poor naruto...hes surrounded by idiots... |
dead acount 78934 chapter 2 . 1/7/2011 nice...the first chapter wasnt really good but this is amazing...sepiroth?...i know ive heard that somewhere b4... anyway...you could put wat theyre saying in "quotation marks"...it would help more... |
ao3lover101 chapter 7 . 6/19/2009 O.O i love it update! |
Sai'mne chapter 5 . 3/13/2009 it's cool but i dont get it |
Hakkyou no Yami chapter 6 . 11/9/2008 really interesting, I await your next chapter. |
nim istar chapter 1 . 10/2/2008 only problem i see is with your dialogue, its hard to get used to the - over the "". |
DarkRavie chapter 5 . 9/30/2008 Great chapter. I can't wait to read what happens in your next one. |
Bleedndreamz chapter 1 . 9/30/2008 Sarutobi is the Sandaime's last name the believed first name of the 3rd hokage is Sasuke Sarutobi |
DeltaKyuubi chapter 4 . 9/22/2008 cool story cant wait till you update |
DarkRavie chapter 4 . 9/21/2008 Good chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next! |
captain deoxys chapter 4 . 8/9/2008 Its A good fic, But could you pleas euse quotation marks instead of dashes for dialouge.? It Gets kinda confusing. |
ThePizzaManToughtMe chapter 2 . 6/15/2008 Great story. Plz plz plz update soon! |