Reviews for Take Me or Leave Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() blaise is my spirit animal i freaking swear... |
![]() ![]() Very cute, great story! |
![]() ![]() beautiful |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story |
![]() ![]() ![]() .Love Is my new motto. Keep writing girl, you've got real talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is GOLDEN! Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait...how did Theo and Madison die? |
![]() ![]() I don't get it. Why did he say Jason's a nice guy and that she should give him a chance when he really doesn't want her to go out with him, especially because he's a playboy? I don't get it. Why say he's nice and then say he's got a reputation as a playboy? Why? |
![]() ![]() Why was she dating Jason if she had feelings for another guy? Seriously! And this Sarah person: you're going to mention her again, right? |
![]() ![]() She shouldn't have been so distraught. She's dating Jason after all. Didn't she choose him? Seriously! And all that hiding behind Haley! |
![]() ![]() So... what happened to calling each other by their first names? They had a binding contract, right? Why don't they always follow? And you said that the consequences were more severe than the consequences for breaking an Unbreakable Vow, if that's even possible. The not insulting thing between them is working great for them, I think. I don't think Jason grovelled enough. I think Hermione should've pressed the issue some more. I think there's something missing from his story. |
![]() ![]() Why in the world did he tell her he's a nice guy if he has a playboy reputation? This story is outta whack. |
![]() ![]() This story is all over the place. What happened to Jason? What about Cassiopeia? Some characters are mentioned only in passing, but still given relatively detailed descriptions or back stories. It's a shame not to use them. You keep jumping from one point to the next. Keep your focus right. |