Amazing chapter, can you continue to make more chapters pretty please.

please update please update pls update

update

This is a good chapter, you should make more for this story.

Are you gonna work on this again?

Oh, why is there only one chapter? Please make another!

what happen next?

hmmmm...very intresting start...whens the update?

if u right more i may be able 2 give u a good comment or constructive criticism

Can you pleAse updte this story. Maybe even a preview of the next chapter would be fine. This story already seems to good for you to just drop he idea and move on. If you don't want to have this story give it to someone you trust will finish it. Good story so far :-) please finish.

Nice, been waiting for something like this, keep it up! :)

this is good so update or u will make us have ]:

so far, i like where this plots going! even if the world was blown up. i know like everyone else who's reviewed recently on this i'm obviously going to be asking if you could please...PLEASE update! I mean, i don't want to sound mean or anything but I feel like there isn't any point of adding this as a favorite if you aren't even going to update! seriously, it's really good so far but if I don't know what happens i might EXPLODE!

fucking sweet dude, i love Rosalina, she's so cute, please update soon, peace out friend.

dude this story is good don't tell that you have given up on it.