wow. creepy

Eeek!

I can't believe you did that…

This was a little creepy…just the first chapter, and I'm already terribly worried about George. Fred too…but I just thought I'd add to your reviews and let you know you've drawn me in. Off to read more!

You are a terrible writer this is crap this is mentally the most terrible thing you could ever write what would inspire u to write this! It's so terrible and it's mentally scaring me

I really enjoyed the series. Although, a touch violent for my taste.

Wait... This was actually terrible (and not as in what happened to the characters). What the fuck?

Okay so this is the best fic on this site. The best, you hear me? And it definitely deserves more than just 89 (90 after mine) reviews. But the numbers do not matter since your story seems to have gained the recognition it deserves over the years.

What makes this different than most of the other stories on here is the fact that you don't hold back on the detail. And that's commendable! Yeah I did take a break from reading this after the 7th chapter coz it was just so overwhelming. Please don't think I'm complaining, coz I'm not. If it makes you cringe, then it is bloody good!

I'm glad you chose the Weasley twins as your main characters. I just love them so much and DEAR GOD imagine something like this happening to them. George, especially. I love him more now cause he is so f %&*ing brave in your story. Just continue with the sequel so he gets to beat the shit out of Lee. Uggh you have made me detest him. haha.

Either way, its okay if you don't continue with the sequel cause the prequel is just great and long.. and more importantly COMPLETE!

Cheers!

OMG! I love this! :O It's, Intense & amazing! :D

OMG WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? :O

MUST READ ON! O.O

hmm well for the most part I simply don't know what to make of this story.

I usually don't enjoy dark stories... still don't but it's just so ... captivating and moving. It's truly well written and perfectly portrayed.

as a present here's a owl

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Come let me give you a GIANT hug, Starraiser! You've obviously been told this before, but I'm going to say it anyway: You my dear, are a FANTASTIC writer. This fic (I'm not sure if I should call this 'fiction' coz you made it bloody real for me) is like nothing else I have EVER read. There wasn't a single light moment and you just never let the dark mood of the story drop. It was one HELL of a rollercoaster ride.

The summary itself is so amazingly short and intriguing. moving on to the beginning of the story when George is receiving the creepy letters and those scary blank calls.. I was so damn scared for him, wondering how it would be to be in George's place *shudders*. The mood was perfect with George all alone and Fred-less.. totally broken and vulnerable, in short making it so bloody easy for Lee to execute his horrible plans.

And the torture: it was horrible and heart breakingly so. I shall not flame u for the horrifyingly detailed description because it was absolutely necessary to make it so. it helped me realise what a MONSTER Lee is. I haven't hated and felt sorry for someone at the same time. But I felt that for Lee. He just took obsessing to a whole new level. That crazy psycopath.

The flashbacks were another brilliant thing. u know, alternating between the present and the past events. Just wonderful .

POOR GEORGE! POOR POOR GEORGE :'(.. he never had a chance. not one good thing happens to him. Lee has made his life pure hell, Fred doesn't love him back, annoying malfoy has stolen his place next to Fred,his family wants to put him in a mental institution. i cried so much while reading the part where Molly tells George that they are sending him to a mental institution and he has no choice in the matter. Oh you wonderful awesome writer! D':

Another tear jerker was the part in the last chapter where George wants Fred to be the last person he sees before dying.

And finally the end. They just take George away all over again. honestly my brother thought i was going crazy because i was sobbing and cursing the computer. Yeah u made me yell at an inanimate object!

I would so love it if u continued with the unfair to leave Georgie in that terrible deserves to get his revenge! That brave wonderful boy!

Muuuch love to you!

SERIOUSLY DUDE! I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW MUCH I CRIED WHILE READING THIS! It's about the most tragic thing I've ever read! I love how you've done the flashbacks and the reality so contradicting, as well as how you've managed to create some understanding for every single character! There are a bunch of more things that I'm absolutely amazed over, and I gotta tell you that you're one heck of a writer! I have no idea how you've managed to write something as heart-wrecking as this, though.

Sorry that I'm not writing an amazing review, because you sure as hell are worth it, but it's 2AM and I'm dead tired.

This story has driven me insane! I can't-I don't know- I -I...oh-my-god...

One minute I'm all WHY DID I READ THIS... and the next minute I'm back to reading it. NEVER have I read a fic SO detailed and SO brilliant..

I was literally sitting with my hands partially covering my eyes while reading the chapters where Lee tortures George. I love the crucio kinda torture, BUT THIS! OH-MY-GOD!You really really really know how to keep the readers intrigued. You are a fantastic writer... and I'm not someone who can watch or read similar scenes without diving head first into the world created by the author. Oh god every scene.. ever chapter.. the flashbacks..the monologues... You've done a fab job! I've read Dean Koontz's novels and your writing style is strikingly similar to his. I hold a BA degree in Psychology myself and we've had to visit mental assylums, rehabilitation centres etc for field study. I have had to study several cases involving rape victims and the trauma they go through is bone-chilling.

George Weasley is my favourite character from the HP series and its hard to read (and imagine O_O) something like that happening to him. You've successfully ruined Lee Jordan's character for me haha!

But I take comfort in believing and knowing that Fred and George are wonderful guys (just brothers) and Lee is their best friend (with a normal, wonderful family)... and oh yes, Fred never dies! NEVER EVER!

I'm sorry if I annoyed you with my lengthy review but you with your fantastic story almost erased the actual HP series from my head. And I simply had to re-assure myself that this doesn't really happen. I hope you continue the sequel and have George KILL LEE!

No No, Lee is a good guy! A really GOOD guy who has a crush on Angelina and NOT George! :( :( Darn,its not working!

Hi, I'm not somebody who reviews at all. But your fanfiction just deserves to have one.

Never in my life I've read such a crazy, sick and definitely most amazing story.

I was tormented reading this but I have to tell you I liked that a lot. It's just amazing how psychological and detailed this story is. I've been diving into another world while I read it, because it's just so amazingly well written and described.

I loved every chapter of it, though sometimes I just needed to relax. Chapter 7 or 8 were probably one of the worst for me. I think that were the one's where Lee tortured George that much that I myself couldn't take it anymore. But it was still brilliant!

But then you really captured me within your own story when you were going to rescue poor Georgie. All the background story with Lee and his family was breathtaking with this you created another world that I was gladly willing to accept.

Also the nightmare-curse was really creative and cool but on the other hand frustrating, too. I indeed hoped with every chapter after his rescue that things could be slightly normal again. But I know now, that was quite wrong. :(

Apart from that I loved how you fitted every character perfectly into the story. Couldn't have done it any better. Especially Draco was well put, at times being his natural self and then actually being nice again but always thinking of his own family which was very cute. Sometimes I really hated him, which is good, really! ;D

Now for the ending...

Well I didn't expect THAT. It also shocked me quite much I never thought that many people could die in only one chapter. (And I cried in book 7? hahahah!) But I understand why you've done that. Lee is merciless and completely insane... I thought he would just kill Fred and George or anyone else who would interfere. But he really lost his mind didn't he? I must say, I can never look at him the same. Whatever fanfic I read now I never like him like I used to. (Which is just one of the after-effects your fanfic gave me)

But it is alright considering this is just one of the best fanfics I've ever read. So really good work here. ;)

I love to think that Fred might have survived, though your sequel doesn't give me the impression that I'm right with that. Hope he did anyway. I'm also sorry for George and EVERYONE else! Really who's gonna live a normal life now after that? Who on this planet might be save from Lee? I have no clue.

But all in all this is a really great fanfiction, disturbing also maybe but in the best way it could have been.

I hope you're still reading any comment made. I'd be very glad if you also continue the sequel of this.

Thank you very much for writing this story! It'll stay in my heart, brain and I guess bones forever. ;D

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I FREAKING LOVE THESE! I LOVE YOU ! I LOVE HOW THIS IS ALL PLAYED OUT! :O OMG SUCH A RUSH! O.O AAHHHHH! NEXT CHAPTER! NEXT CHAPTEERRRRRR! 3