Please don't rewrite it.*insert puppy eyes*

It was kinda hilarious, It's fit that Kaido should settle things for Satomi fshhhhhhhuuuuu/well it was a nice story, matta tsugi no toki!

I really like your style. for some reason, I'm getting attached to Kaido, and I want some Hikaru and Ryoma, they seem kinda alike. I like how things seem to turn around and around without any particular plan, pretty hard to predict. Nooo, poor Satomi, life is so cruel on a girl's hair, but I didn't want her to take Ryoma's place and don't marry her for Kami-sama's sake! Oh this is so dramatic, huhuhu, ja, matta kondo, nee!

please please pleeeeaasee update soon! this story is amazing:) i 3 it:)

UPDATE WOMAN I'm being selfish but I DONT CARE! :p

You can rewrite it. :) I'll be looking forward to it!

-nao-chan

Satomi is so cute! I can't wait till the love between her and Kaidoh sprout! I absolutely despise Satomi's parents! XD I kind of wish to see more of HikaruxRyouma... Well, keep up the good work!

-nao-chan

Looking forward to the other featured pair! :3

Sa-to-mi-chan~! You updated! YAY! I was looking at fanfiction this morning and I was like, "nu-uh. OMG She updated blah blah blah" IN short, I spazzed.

I have to update MY stories now because of you. T-T

Oh well, that's okay. you had a long chapter... And that was usually the amount of pages for an average amount. Hehehehe...

Good job! And I'm glad you're gonna try to update sooner.

But that's only because of summer vacation, ne?

-Kuro Hoshi-

please update this soon..!

uhh..

please update this soon..

i like it!

nee.. is this also ryomaxOC?

ohh.. the characters are you and hoshixhikari080.. ;)) i'll finish reading this some other time.. i've got tons to do.. don't delete this please.. it's good.. update soon! jaa!

wah! she's moving? NEED. TO. KNOW. WHAT'S. GOING. TO. HAPPEN. *stares at screen*

Uh, okay.

I read until this chapter.

Your OC, er, OCs are Mary Sues. Satomi all of a sudden gets some sort of drama with her family and has to fly back home, so she tries breaking up with Fuji? Okay, seriously, too cliche. Satomi having issues with her family, check. Being able to do a tennis moves just like Echizen can, check. Can speak in English? Check. Okay, definite Mary Sue. If you don't know what a Mary Sue is, check SPAMSPOTII's profile.

Hikaru pretends to be a guy, and speaks English? Yeah, total Mary Sue over there.

And why is the whole last section in bold? Unless you're saying they're speaking in English, but I don't understand why Fuji would speak to Satomi in English if they both can speak in Japanese.

If you have any questions about my review feel free to email me.

~A-chan

Um, okay. All I can see right now is one big cliche happening, and although I'll read more later, I need to tell you one thing.

A girl dressing up as a boy and joining the boy's tennis team is just too cliche. TOO many people in this fandom have used it. I've probably seen more than a hundred fics with this sort of thing.

Please use something else. Your OC does not need to join the boy's tennis team, or play tennis for that matter. She's turning into a Mary Sue.

~A-chan.