I want this a sequel please

Your plot is interesting but have some major holes. The first one is obviously the time paradox you have created and the fact than from what we know of time turner, they don't work like that. But more importantly, with your plot, Voldemort should have won. He only lose because he and every death eaters are complet idiots. He located when exactly Alexander went in the past and his reaction is to sent people at the exact time period ? That's pretty dumb, why not send people BEFORE Alexander even arrived ? Then he could secure Harry before him. For such a supposed smart and manipulative dark lord, he is not very clever.

beautiful ending, great story

Good story

Omg I'm crying so hard write now I love this story so much like serious omg I have to say I could literally picture this as a movie or a published world recognized novel I love this so much

Please I need more

this was amazing...definitely captivating...
I have read so many twin-fics...and this has been one of the best ones...
but I wish you had written a short something about what happens when alex returns to his own time...would have been interesting to know...!

Thanks for the awesome story!

I like

SOOOO CUTE. Loved it.

Fantastic story.

This is one of the best time travel stories
I have ever read!

Richard Robinson

Cool. Awesome. Heart- rendering.

Loved it totally. Best Fic.

Really original please continue!

Love it.

But I do have a request:

Though I do know how Harry ended up as a Malfoy and everything else, I just thought it would be a good idea for you to write a prequel to this. You know, a story of what happened before this?

I hope you know what I'm getting at.