I didnt like how he force them to have sex with him

Loved it all. I do not know which of the three is the most shameless. But, I think Kakashi has a slight advantage. Good fic.

Seriously, good sequel. I hope there is a sequel to this one too!

I'm sorry to say that I didn't enjoy this as much as the first one. Kakashi's actions were done without consent on either Iruka's or Naruto's part, as such it drained the romance out of it for me.

There was nothing wrong about the story and I understand why so many others enjoyed this but I have a thing for clearly displayed consent. I'm not saying that every action needs to be asked about before hand (though some actions certainly should ex. bondage) but I do feel consent needs to be displayed and Kakashi's actions didn't have that feel.

Keep up the good work but please watch that in the future.

nice better than the original

Neat. 3

More and More I like the idea of Three ways between these guys, it's hawtt. Bravo.

LOL! i loved your ending! and the smut part was very hot 3 great job X3

This was a really great read. :)

This should have been the end, though, lol. :P

Omake:

Tonight was intended for reading. So, after ‘showering’, I lay on my comfortable mattress with it’s cotton covers and feather pillows to finally continue the epic love fest that is my beloved Icha. Unfortunately, I still had that nagging feeling drilling away at my skull. Some things are clearer to me now. I’ve discovered a secret relationship which might, literally, still be in motion this very moment. Shouldn’t that be the solution the irritating puzzle inside my brain? I tried to think precisely about the matter. It definitely had something to do with those two, no doubt. But, I’d already learned the truth. What more could there possibly be? …It hit me. Well, my book hit me in the face as I realised what was causing my conundrum. It had been lurking there the whole time.

"Shit! I forgot my mask!"

It's even better than the last one! ) I love it when Naruto is with both Kakashi and Iruka! D

-gives a very Kakashi like perverted giggle-

Man I could just see Kakashi's eye expression at the end.

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

oh dear lord that was so hot! :0 im in shock!

I love your writing and made this short story just W.O.W. i want MORE i need MORE you have to write lots MORE! please!

i cant even think of a score to give u it was so awomse.

omg...sohott...i think i need a 'shower' too. XD

Your smuttiness grows and grows, and grows. But that's a good thing... 5/5 for that.

Despite the scenario, you've managed to keep the characters the same, which is good. Loved the end bit, and the blindfold/mask part.

A sequel to this one? Any plans? o_O