Reviews for Secession
Sekira91 chapter 12 . 5/14
This is one of the best canon following fics I have ever read, where Sasuke doesn't abandon himself (he is what he is) and Naruto isn't stupid. They're just in love. You're amazing, be proud of yourself! And thank you for this.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/12/2019
Wowwwww...
bartlettpear chapter 12 . 8/19/2017
Their ending made me cry, it was heartbreaking, Naruto's realization, Sasuke's recognition, his words, their kiss and Sasuke's unvoiced last thought ;A;
Juugo letting go, Sai and Suigetsu saying goodbye, Zetsu's words getting Madara to move was a nice save, Sasuke's safeguard on Naruto destroying Kabuto, Sakura helping Naruto get away with Sasuke's body, the burning- this grief orz
Sakura, Iruka, and Tsunade watching Naruto go, and those last words- wonderful ending. Thank you for this amazing epic.
bartlettpear chapter 11 . 8/19/2017
Naruto catching Sasuke off guard and his roundhouse kick was badass. Hinata and Tenten against Konan was a nice face off. Kiba and Akamaru, and Shino against the Zetsu and Shino possibly taking out Zetsu was whoa. I had no idea Karin could bite herself to heal, that's crazy. Thank goodness for Temari joining their battle. Nice painting of the Pein battle, Kakashi's last stand was cool. Ino and Sakura did great. Iruka and Chouza, totally didn't expect to see them. I like your inclusion and highlighting of so many characters, the battle sequences were wonderfully done. The beheading exchange between Sai and Suigetsu made me sick, but was awesome too orz
Your Naruto and Sasuke fight is my absolute favorite fight I have ever read, you two(?) did a brilliant job rendering that.
bartlettpear chapter 10 . 8/19/2017
Kiba saying that he wouldn't blame or be surprised if Naruto left with Sasuke was unexpected. Their conversation and Kiba and Akamaru's reaction to Naruto's words endeared them to me. I forgot to say that you for Homura speaking up on behalf of Naruto in one of the previous chapters. Naruto and Sakura's bond was something I really appreciated at this moment. I feel bad for Hinata in regards to the misunderstanding but she is kind and big hearted to respect what she thinks is there. Shikamaru stopping Naruto right before letting him go was perfect. The different fights you introduced was done extremely nicely, my favorite were Sai and Suigetsu, they seem like they would've been good friends in a different life. Sasuke realizing Naruto's attacks were meant to destroy his coat made me smile, Naruto would do that.
bartlettpear chapter 9 . 8/19/2017
This chapter was so sad, Naruto's regret and Sasuke's resignation. That flare of hope dying like a candle in the wind line. Sakura and Shion supporting Naruto in their different ways. I am predicting either Naruto or Sasuke alone is going to die that they both might die.
bartlettpear chapter 2 . 8/19/2017
Naruto realizing Sasuke was having them run away was hilarious. The wrap up was worrisome.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/24/2015
Unexpected ending
peachflavorr chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
Let's not cry.
memo ouji-sama chapter 12 . 5/25/2015
All I can say is, well, that's sad. And it is.
I really thought Naruto's going to die and Sasuke, for all he's worth, would either commit suicide or become the Rokudaime, in some ways. And I'm a bit confused about Itachi's gift to Naru. I mean, I've read the manga. Is it the same? The purpose of Sui's eye, I mean. And if it was Sui's eyes or another thing Itachi gave.
Ph3N10x chapter 12 . 1/9/2015
you touched my heart
TheCheshyHunter chapter 8 . 8/6/2014
Oh my god The A\N statement at the end of this chapter made me die from laughter My friend I'm right now is afraid of whether or not I remember how to breathe
winsteralwaysrox chapter 12 . 9/7/2013
who's taking after jiraiya?
jhimenie.towers chapter 12 . 12/8/2012
I loved it!
Sharingan85 chapter 12 . 11/22/2012
it may not have been the ending i was hoping for... but it was still good...
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