I can only remember one thought when Riff was "torturing" Cain: Riff, you bastard..._

You write so incredibly. n_n happy face. It's wonderous. I tried writing a Count Cain (i've never even really read the series, so what was I thinking?) and now I feel inclined to (read the series and) start it up again.

You have a sinfully delightful talent. n_n happy face again.

Oh my.../is happy/

That was really really amazing O.O

I wish I could write yaoi as good as this...I'm learning, slowly :)

This is like...such a beautiful pairing. They're so perfect ! :')

Anyway...yes. One of the best one shots I've read recently ! Instant fave :D

I can't believe I've never read this before! It makes me so sad, and I miss your writing soo much! You just write everything so beautifully. I mean, you even make a lemon beautiful and, believe me, that's quite a feat in my book.

I just love the amount of passion you place between them-not only the physical, but (and mainly) the emotional. Also, I really love how you had them start off really slow and unsure of themselves, especially with how their society/rank is.

Reading the series makes this fic so sad. *sighs* I guess this fic really could go with practically any series with some changes, but I'm really glad you decided to go with this one. First Godchild I read is probably going to be the best one, lol. I miss your writing! Maybe I'll be able to find something else that I've apparently missed... Sorry it took so long! But I loved it so much. Hope you're doing well and that school is treating you well.

Incredibly well-written! I love the emotion that you managed to portray in this fantastic piece of fiction.

Holy crap...you are WAY too good at that. This is fantastic. I'm going to go look for other things you've writting now. :)

Very good! Sensual...and no misspellings or anything like that. I've found that sometimes, the story is written well, but the lack of "checking over" really detracts...no such problem here!

God it gave me goosebumps,it was very detailed and very grafic.I LOVED IT!

:O

This is so beautiful! T-T

I love it!

Very nicely written, and I thought the closing words were beautiful.

Thank you for the gorgeous writing, and keep up the amazing work!

E! Omgomgomg this fic was beautiful! T_T I love it! Thank you so much for writing it!

Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous.

This was well written I enjoyed to the end, it makes you forget that it was fanfic and not from the actual story

I look forward to reading your other stories

...wow. *_* You certainly can write and for that I deeply appreciate this. Really lovely.

That was adorable!

omg omg omg omg this is just so perfect! so well written! i just can't express how perfect this is right now! squee only love these two are just too perfect for each other