Well... ar least you tried to wrote something new and original...
But it still bullshit about Naruto's Sasuke's character

interesting story. I look forward to more.

this is just stupid. its your story bud but this shit where naruto just gets power at the ass is so old and pointless it kills the story not to mention the romance. but hey to each their own in its on way its a good story just not for me

So far I liked the story. A lot new changes and been a while sense I read a Naruto main fic that had a friendly Sasuke in it.

Good chapter

Alliance hmmm

I think the men in the council room were torn between agreeing with Naruto's words and flat out killing him due to the fact they'll be tied to their beds for a while.

bro do you even read your own story? how the shitballs did sakura's mom's name go from rose to mebuki. For fucks sake i don't care if rose was "her name before the real mom was canon" keep the oc for continuity's sake lmaooo

yeah yikes this chapter sucked ass

yo lmao sorry but HOW THE FUCKING CHRIST

IS SHIZUNE THAT GODDAMN NAIVE AND FUCKING RETARDED

seriously did you have to write a fucking shizune that literally has like a dozen extra chromosomes

Absolutely epic potential momentum building here!

nice story. just found it

A sex sense ability really?

good chap

It's quite a good story with an interesting twist to Naruto. I look forward to seeing how it progresses.