that was soo cute hope u rite more stories like this one

sweet story(:

InuyashaKagome forever!

It accually wasn't that long. There's some good ideas in here but it skips around to much. You lead up to something great (like the party) and then nothing. Rather dissapointing sorry :/

it was so great i wanted to cry! . best story i have read!

WOW THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ ALL YEAR! AWESOME JOB

KYA! I loved it!

It was really interesting! I liked it but some of it was a little confusing. I think it would be better as a full fledged story rather than a oneshot so readers can get into it more. The setup (w/the italizing) made me think of a preview to a movie. Maybe eventually you can expand on it more. _

cool i liked it it was short and sweet good job

This was definitely cliche . . . yet it was also sweet. I really enjoyed ready it. The only problem, well not really a problem considering it was a one-shot. The flaw was that it was really fast paced and left a lot to the imagination. But I suppose that was the point.

Anyway. I just wanted to say that you did a great job.

~Dreamer6164~

I thought it was okay, but she just figured it out there at the end, but Kouga had told her before... ? That just didn't make sense to me. It was still good, though. :)

Kipcha

wow i really enjoyed that! This is my first Inuyasha fanfic and I luved it!

GREAT JOB!

EmoliciousXAnimeXFreakX123

Cute, I like it!

da story waz great i jus wish it waznt complete it waz gettin really good n den u ended it :( but ya i luved ur story even tho i still wish u hadnt ended it dat early hope u make sum more storyz at least but it'd still b great if u decided 2 continue dis story :D anywayz hope u respond 2 ma review 'til den bye byez :P lol

i like how inuyasha's favorite animal is a dog!a little insider ,

:)

love the story.

check out mine sometime please

Oh...This is adorable...I love it.

Good job!

~Hannahkimi