I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings, but it is slightly annoying to see. In a sentence you used the word 'weather' in the incorrect manner. In that certain sentence, the correct usage of the term would be 'whether'.

I bet I can guess why Rosalie was so mad...

I so love this story. Please do continue with new moon. I would love to read it in jasper's POV.

I love it and your right couldn't see how you can really change it either.

I think your story is really good. But i sometimes get confused becaue the point of view keeps on changing. You have half alices point of view and another half jaspers something like that. But I honestly LOVED it. Your story is also the longest and with that its the most intresting!. Honest.

All the love

GlossieCherry

ps: creator of " Midnight moon" and " Morning Sun" and " A poem for your beloved". If you get the chance please read either one and review - comment or . They are quite short.

O God. Wat r they gonna do

Oh, Jasper's in troubl, lol

Why did Alice "say its too dangeroius for you" ?

Jasper was in an army of vamps n almost got killed on a regular basis. i have a feelin he can take care of himself.

Was she just being over-protective? Does his past make her more protective?

So many questions so little answers!

Anyway, it was awsome as usual.

there so over-protective.

is the single "I" at the end there 4 a reason or is that a typo?

loved it! i love how he hates it wen they "keep an eye on him" he's awsome, n thats was awsome!

Aw That was so adoarable (and dramatic, and sad, and touching and...)

Good Job! I cant wait to read the new moon one!

HaHa mice use of the word "mellow" ;)

I love Jasper

and this is so cool because it's like what happened in Midnight Sun right?

oh i love how you have put this in jaspers story look forward to reading more cant wait

oh this is really god look forward to more

yep this is another great chapter