This was super cute. I think I've read every Warren/Layla fic in existence on the internet by now, and this is one of my favourites.

The fight scene with Lila reminds me of a fight scene in the Avengers LEGO Marvel Super Heroes with The Leader, crossed with general Magneto shenanigans. xD I thought the fight scene was fine!

"It was the beginning of a beautiful friendship. Alright, that wasn't true. It was the middle of a beautiful friendship." Bahahaha, this had me dying laughing. Great line!

Awwwwwww33

... I'd feel bad about my review of your last chapter, except its literally your fault. I went back and reread and it specifically says that Lila was born AFTER Mommie Dearest's untimely (or was it timely?) demise.

Still a good fic, though, regardless of the things that make my eye twitch-and you already apologized for all mistake so, *shrug* whatever...

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Question: Gwen/Sue/Psycho Bitch got turned into a baby during her big fight with The Commander and Jetstream-no offense, but how the fuck did she have a kid a year AFTER said transmogrification?!

Other than that, though, it was good. The fight scenes were fine and everything.

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I remember loving Swan Lake, too... I literally haven't seen it in years, though. Also, sexually harassment has never seemed more appealing...

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I would like to point out that, when Warren is asking Layla how she's doing, you accidentally wrote WARREN instead of WILL, in regards to them having broken up.

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Congrats in finishing your first story! Yaayyyy! It was a really great story and I dound the book summary so funny!

I liked it

I *seriously* have to stop reading your stories. It's getting late.
But I just loved this fic, even if you hated it. And I can't seem to get enough of Layla/Warren, especially when you write it.
Keep writing!

Loved it!

Oh no not the we need to talk that just means trouble

Love it hits ya when ya least expect it

That girl is starting to fall hard