Sweet story. I haven't read one like this before, and the plot was really interesting. I like the interactions and the writing - well done!

What a beautiful story! So different from the usual! Thank you for sharing!

Just to point out: it's epilogue, not epilouge. The latin root changes the sound entirely that way.
I liked the story by the way ShikaTema is my Naruto OTP.

I really enjoyed this fanfic, it was cute and Shikamaru and Temari's relationship is adorable! Great job

I have to remember the spontaneous napping! If I mention it in my own fanfic. (Cause it fits) I'll leave a disclaimer that I don't own the idea! I found it so funny
I hope that's ok...

Bloody fucking brilliant.

Personally, it hurts to see my SasuSaku, my OTP of OTPs, be destroyed, but I'll let it slide. Overall, this was a pretty good story. I really did enjoy it. :)

Personally, I feel like everything that happened in this chapter was way too sudden and rushed, and it all came out of nowhere. It didn't feel right to me. There should have been more development regarding everything that's been explained in this chapter in the previous chapters, so that way, all the explanations wouldn't have seemed so rushed.

Otherwise, I'm glad Shikamaru and Temari got together in the end. :)

I'm glad Temari's curse has been broken, but I hope they get Kankurou and Gaara back soon. Man, although I do like Chiyo as a character, she can be cruel when it comes to matters that don't involve her.

Wow... I'm glad Shikamaru got Temari to smile, but this must be so hard on her. I hope she figures things out, because I feel terrible for her right now. :(

Ah, so that explains it. The whole situation with Konoha and Orochimaru makes more sense now. I'm glad it seems like Shikamaru and Temari are getting closer, even though I don't think either of them want to admit it. xD

Woah... So I'm assuming that Temari granted a wish to Orochimaru, who is the reason why Konoha is in such a bad state? I hope Temari will explain everything and what happened.

Haha, it looks like Shikamaru has really given a Temari a peculiar impression. I wonder what Shikamaru's gonna do to make her smile, considering he's sleeping so much right now. xD

I knew Shikamaru would be the one who'd have to make Temari smile, and I have a really good feeling that he's the one who's finally gonna make her smile.

Wow, this story is already really interesting. I love it. I wonder why Temari will never smile now. I hope we find out. Something tells me that Shikamaru will be the first to make her smile. ;)