First. This is si good

Second. You make me hate Luffy! But yesss sometimes i hate him because he is selfish like that in some ocassionS. If I were Nami after what happened maybe i will really hate Luffy forever HAHAHHA

The way you portrayed all these characters was quite interesting. Though I have to say, you seemed to imply that Nami wasnt interested in anybody at the beginning, which was a little confusing. However, the narration throughout the story was phenomenal. The imagery as well as the plot itself warped its way around really nicely. You seem to put a lot of thought into this.

One specific thing I really loved was the ending. You didnt force Luffy and Nami as a couple. He still has a lot to learn. The wedding dress at Thriller Bark was a nice touch as well. I hope you write more about this couple in the future. Thank you for the engaging read.

J'ai pleuré et sourit ... je me suis mise à la place de Nami au début j'imagine à quel point ça doit être douloureux que l'homme pour lequel tu as des sentiments s'amuse à te marier avec un autre ( seul Luffy baka peut faire ça ) et pour Sanji aussi il était adorable ... mais Luffy et Luffy il ne pense pas encore à ces choses, mais il ne voudrait jamais lui faire du mal. C'était très bien écrit et très touchant j'ai bien apprécié merci

Dang, that's deep. Great one-shot!

awesome story!i love it!

Loved the ending!

Good job! :)

I cried a bit on the part where Luffy demanded them to get married. How stupid can he be? Hmmm..This is really good though.

I was impressed with how you ended this, not everyone has the knack for a unique ending but, there was definitely something about it to be proud of. It hinted at a lesson while leaving it up in the air. Whatever ooc there might have been was used to tell the story, so i didn't mind it, you gave them a reason for a scuffle then you mended it smoothly enough and made Nami content again with what she has, which I liked because getting what you think you want happens too much at the end of stories with similar premises. Glad to have read it. :)

i love this story. it's very reasonable. everyone's in-character. it's smartly done. thanks for the read.

very cute

cute :3 i really like the part where Sanji PUNCHED him. that, was a strong message :o i blame and thank you, Confession68!

Aw.

Random morbid person gets a dress.

O_O

Very eloquently written. I really enjoyed your story, and I think that you did an admirable job in portraying all your characters, especially Luffy. Also, I thought the way Nami takes Luffy's precious hat all the time was really very sweet. Keep writing. I'm a big fan ) .

i think there is some real big ooc with luffy but thats just me...

sounds like something only a drunk delirious luffy would do but meh its ur fic.

was pretty good actually, the nami charity part was kinda random but somehow fit perfectly to the story.

overall rating id give it 6.5 out of 10

(READ THE 2 REVIEWS B4 THIS FROM ANIMEROX1 THEN READ THIS ONE)

PSS-He spent YEARS with Shanks.

Me thinks Luffy picked up some 'things' from Shanks