Reviews for Vulnerable
Confused.Turtle chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Love, love, love, love the way you write! :)
Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Great chapie! ;)
Vamirii chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
... O_O That was fricking amazing. I loved it!
satoshii chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Not crude like some lemons are. It was surprisingly very sweet for a sex scene, which is very hard to pull off without seeming cheesy and cliche. I'm impressed. Excellent work!
KoalaSnow chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Not bad for a first. I sorta wrote a lemon, but yours was better actually :3 But seriuosly, not bad.
FromTheCanopyAbove chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
So sweet! You did wondefuly for your first lemon!
manga19 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
I love the way you write :) you potrayed them perfectly i say Rock on!
The Demonic Ninjas 3 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Amazingly well-written!
KirishimaZen's chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
great lemon!
killaccount909 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
thats is so cute, i really liked the way he was in character. :D great job.
makeitadream chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
wow...very nice im impressed you used emotions to pull the two together and it didn't feel as rushed as some others i have read good description words
Rissa Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
There is no way that was your first lemon! It was too good! I love the fact that you put genuine emotion into this piece. It was just the right length and just the right amount of love and lust! It was perfect!
Animelove101 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
O/o/O

OMG! /./
Shenhui chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
the lemon part was great but something just made me think? did Neji recovered that fast? lolz.. sorry.. just wondering..

Do write some more of this..

Ja.
Mafaldyna chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
wow, it was a nice story! very well written, well done! o
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