Reviews for Vulnerable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love, love, love, love the way you write! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapie! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... O_O That was fricking amazing. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not crude like some lemons are. It was surprisingly very sweet for a sex scene, which is very hard to pull off without seeming cheesy and cliche. I'm impressed. Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad for a first. I sorta wrote a lemon, but yours was better actually :3 But seriuosly, not bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet! You did wondefuly for your first lemon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way you write :) you potrayed them perfectly i say Rock on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazingly well-written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great lemon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats is so cute, i really liked the way he was in character. :D great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow...very nice im impressed you used emotions to pull the two together and it didn't feel as rushed as some others i have read good description words |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is no way that was your first lemon! It was too good! I love the fact that you put genuine emotion into this piece. It was just the right length and just the right amount of love and lust! It was perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O/o/O OMG! /./ |
![]() ![]() ![]() the lemon part was great but something just made me think? did Neji recovered that fast? lolz.. sorry.. just wondering.. Do write some more of this.. Ja. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, it was a nice story! very well written, well done! o |