I, use to watch Captain Power when it first came on, and the idea of Kim, Ron ,Rufus, Wade and Kim's cousin Joss as the new version, is very interesting- especially when the original series ended on a cliff hanger! I will take my time reading this story, until the next review.

Wow. Making it a Favorite doesn't seem like enough.

The tribute to Commander Argus was very appropriate. Thank you.

"Cherries?" Love it!

It just keeps getting better. I'm glad I decided to read this one, even if I managed to mess up a little and read "The Lost Tales ..." first.

And I thought "All Good Things..." would be your Magnum Opus. This will give it a sure run for the money. I am in awe.

JJ I have to congratulate you on a tale well told. I read this before and I needed a nice break from one of my own and this story did that. Now being the writer I am, I wondered about the ending about ten chapters before the end. I was wrong this time.

Now you know you have a very good start on another long one if you have it in you.

ST-103

This has to got be the longest fix I've ever read... Great, but looooooong :) But really, it was amazing. Joss was just hilarious! Almost every other thing that came out of her mouth had me laughing! I have no words though, just really awesome!

really good story was on the edge of my seat

this story took me some time to finish it but it was all worthwile. i've never seen the captain Power series but i just might if it's like this. i loved the way you described the characters, the settings, the plot, everything! it's a bit longer than most admittadly but those are sometimes one of the best! v

-Kaitlyn

urf... I've finally finished reading this ENTIRE story! It's taken me a few days (and nights of falling asleep on my keyboard) to do it, but I finally finished it!

I don't like reviewing a story chapter by chapter after it's finished, so I'll just review here, if ya don't mind.

Fist, DAMN you can write action scenes JJ! I wish I was half as good as you in that aspect.

Second, I WAS all ready to harsh on you for making Drakken so damned evil in this, but then the end redeemed him him for me.

And finally, it was all the different ways you kept bringing Drakken's forces back into the fight that kept me screaming out "Oh C'mon!"... But that's what always kept me going until the end.

Awesome story Dude... Now to read the other stuff you've written for this AU...

booyah! you and I share a lot of the same tastes my friend. alas it has been years since I have seen captain power but I remember it foundly. I love how you ended this story. It was very well done. Made this panda very happy to read it.

I for one think that the way you put the commander in this story was very fitting. Also as I keep reading, I am loving this fic. Those "crazy little stories" indeed.

well okay then, I was trying to figure out where you were going with this but when kim left ron behind... I like it!

this was a extreamly well written story and a great read,i saw the honeymoon ..

and you should do a sequel.

and for the author, you are talented and ask you to continue to make more stories

friend

RipBlade

Well, it's too early in the morning for a comprehensive breakdown. I'm just going to say nice, "you should have stayed in your room," line and that I'm glad you didn't let Drakken escape. A heroic ending is better than a life of guilt. I do wish Kim had said something in the end like, "this doesn't make up for what you did!" or "you better make this count, because I'm not saving you this time!"

I had expected Shego to survive, though perhaps dying as a warrior is a more befitting fate rather than live as a monster.