lol that whole orihime thing at the end

Aww cute. Loved it. Thanks.

Visual Kei(or visual gay as I call it) know as VK too,is a genre...kinda with vocall with grave voices,the band Nightmare is a good exemple of this stile of j rock.

I HATE VK,its so boring _

Great fic! Instant fave!

Well,the fight scene was kinda cool...VERY cool,a the end was beautiful congratulations

a complete love story.

No one goes home broken hearted...aw...

i loved the details you included int thic chapter! Great work. It almost brought me to tears...

Hahaha! i love the last line-literally the last line! Naruto really is amazing.

Just kidding!

Bwahahahaha.

(Ate, bakit agad mo pinutol? nambibitin ka pa oh)

Real comment (On the chapter): why do you have to cut it short? I know, i'm reading it now that it's already completed, but, you know what i mean.

It's very dramatic the way you showed how Tatsuki felt at that exact moment and Ichigo's response to her when his plan blew up. But that ending sort of gave me a Tatsuki/Ichigo feel. Forget about Ishida. Just go on with

But this is your story. I give it a 9.9/10! hahahahaha

Well chesy!

but kawaii! xDD

Well I've just finished reading though the entire thing normally I would review each chapter but I'm pressed for time at the moment and I might forget as this seems like the last chapter.

Well overall it was a pretty good story. I like the Ishida and Tasuki pairing and I think you did their characters very well in this story as well.

Although it seemed to rush it a bit at the end there. It just seems like there is more room for expansion but you chose to end it instead. I mean there is still the other couples as well that you only give hints to, plus what exactly would the dating life of Ishida and Tasuki be like anyway? Would she meet his father and what would he think of the girl?

Plus you never did fully explain why that lure was just laying in the street seems like kind of a major plot hole or very deus ex machina that it was just there. The action scenes you don't have to worry about those were well done and trust me I know what you mean. Fighting scenes are things I don't like to write because of how hard they can get, and I've had to write scenes with multiple characters battling it out in multiple places...not easy...

I do hope you continue on with this, maybe in a sequel dealing with some of the issues you left hanging and maybe throw in some villain into the story as well to spice it up a bit more.

I LOVE IT

i was hoping it would end like this! i knew he was gonna go all 'knight-in-shining-armor' on everybody. good chapter, and your descriptions of the fights scenes were very adequate. i knew what was going on at all times.

good story. do another!

jta!~

i cant wait till the next vhapter this is my fave story ever tatsuki-n-ishida are my fave couple

love it!

even though IshidaxTatsuki will never happen and is such an odd couple!

Hehe P P

x

you are dang skippy.

final chapter? dang. this was a good one, though; i liked the telling of it from tat's perspective. i think i've seen that happen somewhere before. lol.