pk so for sure it makes me bat shit crazy waiting to see whats gonna happen next please write more i have to know whats doin with reno baby hes my fav him and rude

Yes, it needs a sequel. I'm normally not a fan of drunken bar-rage Reno personality portrayals, simply because it's not really portrayed in the game. We see them in the bar in Junon and then again at Turtle's Paradise, but there's no real mention of him being an alcoholic or anything in the game(s). In fact, despite his laid-back personality and slacker's attitude, he does take his duty as a Turk very seriously and is, in the original game, considered 2nd in command.

That being said.

I really actually like the way you write him in the drunken persona. Most people who use that adaptation use - and over use - the "yo" that is never translated over into English dubs/subs. I don't actually mind the persona without the "yo." I actually hate the "yo." So you made me like drunken Reno. That's an accomplishment. -thumbs up-

But yes. Sequel. Please.
NaomiK

I love this story! I would definitely like a sequel if you would do one. All your work is awesome. I can't see any area for improvement. :) I was wondering if such an excellent author as yourself would do a request?

Haha brilliant :) loved it. Strong Reno! Kicking ass and doin' his Turk thing ) awesomeness! I liked how he didn't have a plan but just went with it anyway XD awesome! I also loved how Rude found him :D fantastic! Great job all round :) thanks for writing this!

I love it! And sequel sure does sound great. OwO

You may have done one already, if so ignore most of this review... If not, PLEASE write a sequel!

THis was so freaking well written. Fast paced, gripping, awesome.

Lol so going to leap into your other writing :D

Another chapter, another chapter!

:)

I think your story deserves another chapter. You've got a great handle on Reno and his ass-kicking abilities. Never doubt a red head... Oh the horror... :O

Great job and keep doing yo thang!

Yes, this needs a sequel! Damn hot, sexxy, kick ass Reno and Rude to the rescue... *drools*

Go Reno! XD This is exactly how Reno should be in a situation like this.

sequel for this? YES PLEASE! :D pretty pretty please.

oh! a sequel!

shiny...

:)

The idea of Reno fooling his kidnappers is kinda amusing. I love the summary. Don't you feel sorry for the kidnappers?

-snickers-

yes defintly needs a sequel

oh! please write a sequel! this was good! XD