hope you write more!

its nice i like the power very grassroots never would of thought of that can't wait to see what it does in a battle agints another death god

the cards part was so stupid imo. I just hope thats not his main power...anyways update this soon this seems interesting.

I like this story!

I really do hope you can update soon

AWESOME

hey i jus want to ssay that i like ur story and that it is prettty good and well thought out cant wait for the next chapter(4)

An alright chapter. The only reason why I say this is because there is too much flashbacks that it is getting boring. Also I don't understand how Naruto is still being calm after witnessing what he saw. I would be overwhelmed by anger or something like that and would hardly say anything to those thugs, just want to torment than kill them. Also Naruto keep talking and the thugs doing nothing I don't understand. It would be understandable if something like his reishi is being released in a humongous amount that they freeze in terror but since you did not explained it feels like watching one of those overly cliche anime or cartoon. Hope I did not sound too harsh but this was in my mind while I was reading this chapter.

Nice chapter, like the story as well.

Although there were some few mistakes, You almost got itadakimasu right, just need to replace the e with i. Also in Japan people say oyasumi(in casual way) or oyasuminasai(in proper way) when saying good night to other people.

ok one thing is how did issei go from a girl last chapter to a guy this chapter it makes no sense no offence ment just some constructive critisism

wicked fic. i hope to you update soon and hope to find out more about naruto's zanpakuto.

really great so far.

great story keep it up!

ok I LIKE THIS BUT I THOUGHT THIS CHAPTER WAS ALIIT TO M RATE EVEAN FOR ME

well the story was good and i enjoyed it all the way up untill naruto got his "deck of cards". sorry dude,i know that you were probably trying to go for something different but i think it would have helped if you had stayed in the realm of swords in some way.