Omg! What a amazing fancic! I love it so much!

Loving this story so far but I gotta say I hate how Zuko keeps being portrayed as the bad guy. He’s been trying and trying to help her and she’s been pushing him with horrible comments. Yes he’s done bad things but if you keep throwing them in his face and saying he will never change, them to be disappointed when he does act like that. Idk I’m not like this katara

Ugh sorry but katara is the stupid and irrational one, atleast Zuko knows that they could die! All katara is doing is pissing him off, being ungrateful and uncooperative. She clearly doesn’t know that she’s in the middle of war cuz she’s acting like a little kid with no real life experience.

I’m sorry but why doesn’t Katara pee in a bucket or something and use that. Lmao cmon. Desperate times.

Wow I needed that , thank you

Overall I think this was a great Zutara fanfic. It felt like it dragged a bit during the captured portion and I felt like Chan didn't really need to be in this at all. I also feel like the story was just stopped too abruptly. It would have been nice to them interacting while they were back with the Gaang. This story was still cute tho

Oh my GOSH this is INCREDIBLE! You wrote their chemistry so perfectly and their passion was so perfect and AHHH you had me up till 2am last night reading and I spent the rest of the day finishing this wonderful story?! I am SO glad to hear there’s a sequel and I can’t wait to go looking for it but I just had to tell you how amazing this is and how great of a writer you are! I love how Zuko and Katara came together! I love how they escaped, it was so clever and so well thought through. I can’t wait to see what happens next! :)

Bro I just went back in the fanfiction, it took you 18 chapters to get Zuko and Katara back to the Western Air Temple. Why do long? It honestly could have been condensed to 11 chapters, the 6 chapters of Chan could have been done away with and 1 or 2 chapters in Prison could have been totally left out. I really don’t like staying in an AU Setting because I cannot picture what it would look like. The tone of the story made everything seem Dark and Dreadful, which isn’t a problem, it’s just that you spent too much time in these two settings

This is a great story, but I hate that do many people have stolen your idea of Katara and Zuko being captured from the Western Air Temple, a Zuko field trip, or Ember Island. It always takes them so long to join back up with the others and they are always getting tortured in a cell together. The first time I read this, it was a 8/10 Rating but after gaining a dislike for these type of fics it would be a 6.5/10, but I’ll still leave at an 8/10. I hate that you made Chan a part of this lol he was so annoying in the show, all 2 minutes of his Screen Time.

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Dark themes ;(

Whas

Wha

More ;(((

I want more