Ooh... that was intriguing. Abel Nightlord. Cute and bubbly ester. You know abel so well. Liked the sideview story of Lilith. Told why she did what.

I love this story...actually I love all the fics that you have written.

You mentioned that these are a set of ficlets? When will you add more? I really enjoy reading all the stories you have written in the 'Milk Tea' series. Your characterization has been spot on and it is so heartfelt it seems to be written by the original creator!

I am truly in awe of you and your skill.

I look forward to more stories written by you !

Your humble fan.

That was a nice perspective.
Very nicely done :)
SMB

wow. I LOVE it. it's just so... wow! 3

that was a good fanfiction that you had made so far i hope you continue with the story because i love it so much i almost thought i was the character esther and im with father nightroad but mostly people be calling him by his first sometimes (abel) but i love itV bye

So good but it kind of sounds incomplete please make more of this

To write an excellent story is one thing;to write an excellent story which leaves readers to a world of imaginations-now that's a job well done~! XD

I read through your every TB stories and decided to review on this,'cause this is the first story that eventually got me hopelessly sinking into the others~

I don't know if you'll read this,but I'm really glad to read your story and all~ They're the BEST~! X3

PS:And I'm wondering...will your TB series continue? I'm gonna miss them so~much if you don't...

lovely...brilliant story...I always felt that Abel needed some love ...awwwww..thanks a billion

Personally in this story I feel Lilith should suffer for her choice. I know it's not nice but don't care. She made the choice knowing Abel would suffer for it. Abel was the one who got the short end of the stick in that decision. Always second place to his twin. Like that wouldn't hurt him even more.

i love this, ive read it 3 times now. awsome work! cant wait for more :-)

This breaks my heart. I love Lilith's character so much, and seeing her pain in a non-canon view is gut-wrenching. But still beautiful. :)

I loved this litle set of stories! They were wonderfull!

WOW! i truly love how you wrote the story. so poetic

although confusing at times it was still so wonderful! i liked the feel and the atmosphere of the story. it was somehow captivating in a way that made me want to read the story with emotion... heheh. keep up the good work! gambatte!(_)/

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Omigosh! Your fic is one of the greatest written fics around! Gawd.. This is my first time reading a Trinity Blood fic and I really am not disappointed! And it's rated M! I mean... We can't always something this wonderful in this category. No offense intended but.. well, I'm just making my opinion. I'll be hanging around more often now! Thanks to you and for making my day! :)

~going to favs~

This is a truely beautiful piece. It's one of the best fairytail style ones I've ever read. normally I don't really like this sort of thing. I'm like the Abel you portrayed in this story in that respect. I don't believe in fairytails. I may have lived a sheltered life but I'm a realist, at least to certain amount of sensibility. I love how you compare Esther to Seth in the story and interaction between Seth, Abel and Esther was cute. I also like how you have the changes Abel goes through throughout.

The scene where Seth takes Esther to Abel is truely magical in my eyes. The original love triangle is good as well and also the slight conflict within that Lilith feels at the end with a small amount of regret. It's all been mixed together quite nicely and I like how you have Seth being one of the few who knows 'Abel the person' and not 'Abel the dark angel'.

I also like how you have Esther and Abel getting married and becoming expectant parents. I think the baby would be adorable! Great story, even greater idea!

I have to ask though, how long will it last? Abel's immortal, Esther isn't. Does his 'love bite' make her immortal as it makes her his and visa versa? I think it's a cute idea and I now how images of Abel and Esther with children that look a little like both of them around them, playing, laughing, the works. It's a good story with a happy ending straight from a picture book. I love it and I think you should be proud of this piece.

Well done and good luck to you with future works.

Happy writing

Dragon's Ghost