I dont understand Hermione‘s logic at all

Oh man the worst thing for soldier is to fight and also have to ve worried about the love one

Guilt is s bitch that‘s shy you should think thoroughly before say or act

It was censentual. She provoked him on the day I remember the fucking chapter. He said she doesnt need to do it but she didnt listen to him and start insulting oh fuck this is not anyone fault I am fucking furious. What a beautiful story I love your writing btw!

When I think she is clever logical and THIS happened

Oh man this is like a calm before storm. I think Hermione is noce she doesnt throw a fit now and then. Now my concern is at Draco will he will always be good or will he turn in to a git anytime soon

There must be something behind the story of Draco pressed charge against Pansy. They are too chummy

Wtf its like she doesnt want him to end the deal so she started all those insults wtf

I am really enjoying this premise. I just want to say—please fix your dialogue structure. You need to have commas, etc at the end of each dialogue clause. You are OK when you have question marks, but again and again, it’s distracting to read “Thank you” she said, when it should be “Thank you,” she said. “That would be Ron” Pansy said. It should be, “That would be Ron,” Pansy said.
Sorry, but it’s so distracting and it doesn’t stop. I really like the story.

I understand why Draco is acting that way...but I can't help but think "Stop being a prat, Draco"

Loving it so far :D

OMG OMG such beautiful story Uff I loved it

loving this story! and i fully agree with you that Draco and Hermione deserve all the happy ending in the world. much love!

I have to say ai loved the way you portraied Draco in your story. Thank you for sharing

Absolutely brilliant! No other words for it. Thank you writing such a compelling story.

Oook... So I know this amazing story was published like 7 years ago and now I am on chapter 10 and has to stop to write this... Don't You all think that Hermione lost her marbles here? Does she not recall events that begin this? He said he did not want her as her mistress the minute she stepped into the manor, she practically made him go into this deal and after the first time again she came looking for him... I think she acted illogical. I have to read further because I hope in next chapters she will understand how stupidly she acted.