Awesome pls continue!

ooooohhh... creepy... :)

Good story. not the best. keep the good work up!

Congratulations, you have officially entertained me for the past half hour with your outstanding and very insightful writings about the world of Torak, Renn, and of course Wolf. You showed incredible detail to the characters surroundings as well as fastenating ideas and a very creative plot line. You might want to add a disclaimer however stating that you do not actually own the title "Chronicles of Ancient Darkness" nor any of the characters or ideas presented in the book series.

Please continue writing the story. I found it very entertaining and highly enjoyable to read.

this isn't oath breaker

great start, now update asap!

oh, haha, it's already out... i feel smart... -_-'

OMG! Please write more! I think you could be Michelle Paver in disguise. You write so much like her! Seriously though, poor Fin-Kedinn.

I love this. I live in WV,so the book is not here yet. Well I am looking all over the internet for it.

I want you to write more i am dyin without it.

dang! thats good

I really think its going well! I would love to see more of a renn/torak realationship that could blossom through out the story. I love the bit at the beggining where Fin-Keddin says to torak that renn and torak should becomes mates, i though that it was a great staement! I love this story and would really like to read more! Thanks!

Great chapter! Very descriptive.

*gulps* I hope Wolf will take on his "guide" form...

AH! Please Update soon, I love this story! Can't wait to see what happens!

What a proposal from FIn-Keddin! Heh - I'm happy )

OMG - TOORRAK!