Great story. I would like to see a Farscape time travel back to World War 2 story. With Peacekeepers meeting Nazis.

Fantastic concept, excellent beginning. I'd love to see more.

Cool plot and I love your writing. Why can't more people write like you?

Looking forward to what happens next!

I like it so far. I can not wait for the next chapter!

great stuff

This is a great story.

Have anyone think about making a crossover between Farscape and the 7th sea RPG? Both are own by the same Rpg company AEG.

John Still go into the Wormhole but is not Earth,it,s the World of 7th sea,Peacekeepers Follow Moya and are Invading.

I can't blame Jack for being upset that he's being left out of the loop with the Sebeceans. I love the crossover to Gen Jack O'Neill and Jack being friends. Grayza must of made quite an impression that even the government kept it secret. John is conveying as much as possible to this delegation that Grayza is not to be trusted, and knowingly Aeryn and Dargo may be in great danger if he doesn't cooperate with Grayza. It's going to be interesting on how John is going to explain how he closed the wormhole to protect earth and once again, he's bringing that same threat with him. :D

update soon, please i love farscape i'm really looking forward to the new webisode series of it hope it will still have the original cast :)

Great story.

I've always suspected that Scorpious had other motives. He's an enemy that John can't afford to lose. Grayza is even more cunning and menacing than Scorpious. It's sad that Aeryn could not be on Moya and escape what the Peacekeepers have in mind for earth. Saving the Peacekeepers is probably some ruse, that John has suspicions on. It's a shame John's whole family is in danger if they don't cooperate. I wonder what Scorpious has in mind, once they reach earth? It can't be good and certainly contacting John's father may be Scorpious's way of keeping John more in line. :D

I saw this story on Terra Firma, I think. I've enjoyed reading the first chapter and now see how little D is just adorable even around the Sebaceans. I love how John interpets D's little curiousity towards the other. I think he's just like his mother and JOhn's influences will be a key to D's survival. The draw back it that they need humans to save the Sebecean race and I'm sure Grayza is not their best choice, but time will tell. :D

I really like it so far, Please update soon!

Wonderful John characterisation.

I look forward to reading more.

I loved this story. I was wanting more. Look forward to reading chapter 2. Great story line.