The lemon was amazing...but the ending a little sad...still good though! Thank you for sharing!

Ah there's like no smut in this fandom! And there's nothing that ruffles my feathers more than no smut when there's two attractive characters that have that much chemistry that really needto get some luvin'.

jajaja you are of the same opinion than me jijiji i really love how you writte and love how you make this fic _ hope that you make more M for this fandom in the future you are reallly really great

Caspian is really sweet love him ) it is sad that there is very low boys like him (

hope that in the next chapter they could be together )

Hello! just to let you know that i love your stories well i only have read the ones of SUSPIAN and i love them and i loved this pragraph

"You do not needto be protected, for you are capable of it yourself," he traced her eyebrows then along her nose, to her chin, following some unmarked path only he could see, with a calloused finger, "Yet you know yourself well enough to accept help when necessary. You know your strengths. And what is more - you trust me to be at your back. As though I am as able to protect you when you are vulnerable as your brothers are." Now he leaned in, nose pressing to her temple, inhaling deeply, "You allow me to see the strength, the weakness, the woman, the queen." Shivering at how his mouth tickled her cheek, "What is more, you appear to look at me and see what lays hidden that I only want you to see." Caspian sighed as though this was the most important part, "And you do not turn away from it." He reached back, sliding the bolt on his door home,"

the thing is that i also write and i'm writing a SUSPIAN as well so would you let me use the main idea of this paragraph? (it's going to be in spanish) but pleaseee i'm going to change words and the whole scenery but that paragraph just described spot on what i wanted to say! so please? would you mind?please pleaaseee

Such charming words, I'm flushed with the adoration Caspian presents! Susan's queenly nature is also greatly appreciated as it's so rarely seen

Ahhh I love this! I'm glad you have a sequel though, because I want a happy ending for these two lovers! Wonderful job :)

Hot. most people, when writing sex scenes, end up making the characters act like pervs and whores, or have them say crude things. Either that or they write dirty just for the sake of being dirty. But you did well. I also like your writing style. You're good with characterization. I'm going to go read the sequel now.

BTW, "I Believe" is a great song.

Omg that was hot- and incredibly well-written, which makes it so much hotter. Can't wait to read the rest! Also? Don't walk- run to the video store and rent 'Dorian Grey.' Good god... Ben Barnes...yum.

great story ... sad ending though ... can't wait to read the sequel.

very well-written, i think you captured susan's personality without straying too far into AU or OOC.

loved it.

I can hardly see through the tears to read and write this review. Hot lemon, but OMG, so sad.

"silly man" and "lady love"? they sound like an old couple!lol. other than that, its really great.

Ha! They let me review on this chapter, even though they wouldn't allow a second review on the first. I saw that you'd updated I Wish, and I wanted to go back and remind myself of the story. And I have to say again, this is just so good. Sexy and steamy hot but so very well written. It's like tug of war between them the whole time, both physical and emotional, and so full of passion. I love your Caspian. He's mature in a way I wish mine was. *sigh* Can I give him to you for a while so he can learn a few things? Oh and one last thing, the line about even Edmund being a man sometimes was made of win. :)

~em

I love it! Absolutely beautiful.

Wait, huh? No! NO! *dies* I think I need a cold shower and a box of Kleenex now. lol. Susan made herself sound pretty bad with that diplomat comment, great stuff there. Great job.

~em

I really loved it! You definatley should keep going! :)

Whoa! That was hot! I can't believe it was a dream though... you have to make a second one now... Please? The story was brilliant and the personality of Caspian was fabulous. *Sigh*