Reviews for New Whirlpool Vol 1
Zero fullbuster chapter 9 . 9/4
Crap story... anko being engage to naruto when minato is alive and naruto as a baby... she is old... and it is impossible. So this story has so much crap in it l. That it is needed to be rewritten.
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 8/28
Ahio! Qui sono tutti stupidi!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/26
Temari hast a Bug Fan and No Boomerang seriously die you even Watchers Naruto
thegrison chapter 7 . 2/25
I forced myself to keep reading to give this story a fair chance. I will still say Guns kill the whole point of ninjas.
thegrison chapter 1 . 2/25
Way to kill the whole ninja bit with GUNS. Are you serious? If the have Guns then ninja are pointless. All Guy & Lee training is useless with a Shotgun or pistol pointing at them,
devmishra1234gmail.com chapter 1 . 12/28/2019
Nope...not happening...a mother leaving one of her children...nope wont read any further
Csw chapter 25 . 8/17/2019
Excellent story and I can't wait to start volume 2
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2019
what kind of dumbfuck retard makes ninjas in naruto use guns? They don't fucking EXIST here you dumbass! The closest to guns where the fucking kunai launchers Doto had or Senbon launchers Shizune wears. Not fucking GLOCKS you utter moron.
Wonderweed420 chapter 1 . 7/11/2019
The cringe is real just like with all of your other fics.
PGHammer chapter 17 . 5/8/2019
Yeesh - *all* the Clans are leaving - in fact, they are lucky they even have a Hokage. (What's worse is that the Hokage is more loyal to New Whirlpool - in fact, to *Naruto* - than to them - and told them straight up. Basically, they are faced with an ANBU BuBu. (What else can you call it when the Hokage - and his ANBU - are more loyal to another village than his own - and he actually has sensible reasons? Hence ANBU BuBu.)
PGHammer chapter 4 . 5/8/2019
Is poor Naruto-san going to wind up in a harem?
fluttershywinde chapter 23 . 4/23/2019
story so got off track
Vaktus chapter 25 . 4/6/2019
what about sakura. you didnt kill her off
my 2 guys chapter 25 . 10/11/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
Monster King chapter 25 . 9/10/2018
Great story.
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