Oh, why, why, why couldn't this have continued? This has the beginnings of an absolutely awesome story, but it's all just cut short. Why? I suppose it's too late by now to ask, but please, couldn't you please, please update? I'm dying for more and this is too good to lose!

This has been interesting and I can't wait to see how it moves on... keep writing :)

Hey! Why did you stop? I was enjoying this! (Pouty face. You better update or I'll stay mad at you forever!)

Nancy and Jamie? WWII? Mother and son? I SEE A DOCTOR WHO REFERENCE

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Finish? Please? Pretty please?

I love this

i love this

fantastic! i cant WAIT to read more! please update asap, in the meantime i wish you good luck and no writers block in this and all of your future writings. good luck!

Sophie and her brothers had better not end up in Narnia as well, I don't think I could stand it. They're positively horrible. I can't wait until you write about how Peter and Susan are getting to Narnia, that'll be an adventure. (and i hope that something horrid happens to Sophie and her brothers)

Awww, I'm so enjoying this.

Please come back and write more.

I really like this. But how are all four of them getting to Narnia. And please don't let the other children go.

very good chapter. can't wait for more. please update

Ed does seem to have the worst luck sometimes. Are planning on finishing this? Because I am rather interested. Please update soon.

-Dyslexic Nerd

Great story! Hope you update soon. Will Sophie and her brothers be going to Narnia instead of Peter/Susan, or maybe they'll just come along for the ride and give the Witch a shock when she learns that instead of four she now has 8 humans to deal with?