| Reviews for Just Right |
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   Wolvie26 chapter 1 . 1/23/2018 DAMN! *fans self* love it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 He should have fell asleep while he was inside of harry |
| MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/6/2013 hahaha |
| Kindred01 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012 wow |
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 interesting story _ |
| olciak123 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 So f... right! God, that was amazing! |
| DeanneGray chapter 1 . 1/28/2011 Loved it! One of the best Sirry smut scenes ever! Thanks for writing! Xxx |
| honeybelle92 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 So sweet, and so hot. I loved it :) |
| LyssaLaughable chapter 1 . 5/12/2010 Absolutely amazing. and thank you thank you THANK YOU for not having the awkward, "Are you sure?" bit. that is so overrated. xD LyssaLaughable xD |
| DeletedAccount30062015 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009 m great work |
| Pulcher Papilio chapter 1 . 7/1/2009 OMG... omg... this fic is JUST RIGHT. Really. That was one of the most erotics fic I've ever read. So, so well written. The way Sirius tempts Harry to begging him to get undressed is insanely hot. And of course the description of their love-making... GUH. Delicious words. This one shot is PURE GOLD AND LOVE. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY! |
| darkangel1012 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009 I usually have a bit of trouble with this pairing because I love Remus/Sirius, which I THINK was hinted at in the beginning of this little story of yours. However, I'm pretty sure you've just converted me into loving this pairing. I've read a few Sirry stories but this is one of my definite favorites and has secured my place as a Sirry girl. Wonderful job |
| silverdragonscales chapter 1 . 5/9/2009 That was excellent. Your characters were believable and true to form. The only problem I noticed was that your grammar was sometimes a little awkward, especially during the dialog. Other than that, I think it was an excellent job. You might want to think about writing semi-professionally or even professionally. With a good editor to help you, I think you could go very far. (Waves hand, "Oh, pick me, I love editing!) I don't know what your schedule is like, but if you have the time I highly suggest sending in some (perhaps slightly less scandalous) material to an editor, with your own characters. However, since your scandalous material is so excellent, I might also suggest that you send some of that in as well, perhaps to the publishers of those trashy (but totally excellent!) romance novels we all know and love. Just some suggestions, and please pm me if you are interested in hooking yourself an excellent editor (shameless pimpage, I know). TTFN- The Raven |
| LURVEuALL chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 that twas awesome!1 |
| GeminiCancer chapter 1 . 4/22/2009 i loved it. very hot |
