Well done, right sad ton. Julieta

Lovely

Oh wow, this is amazing. You capture her perfectly, you touch on some very complex ideas, and your wording is truly beautiful. No time to say more though I would like to. Keep writing!

Yes he would if it was fi's life or his job fi would win hands down.

Awesome story! Keep up the good work!

I like the ideas expressed here. I'm not sure how much the voice sounds like Fiona, but the thoughts would certainly be hers. I really liked the analysis of Michael-nothing left of him, not even his scent in the air was extremely well put and nice. I also liked the bit about how he chooses to be as he is. Very good stuff!

Not bad. The choice theme was interesting, but you beat it with a club somewhat - however, the last line was poignant despite that. I will say that the narration is more self-aware than I generally imagine Fiona, but maybe that's what you were trying for. I think the piece might have better worked in third person. Exploring the character's inner workings and writing as the character can't always be done at once - not in the same way, at least.

At any rate, definitely keep writing.