Super author!

this s the way i like stepbrother fics to go; one is obviously in love and the other sincerely is in the dark and 'straight.' It makes the chase, and the story, better. But that kick to the face, damn Naruto, that was brutal

I'm surprised this turned out so good. The writing style is nice and the story is just the right amount of angst, forbidden, and love.

I liked it ... that was nice :-)

This was really good. They may have spent the majority of the fic having sex with other people, but you knew the whole time that what was happening was really about *them*, so it made all the sex games oddly romantic in a twisted way.

My only complaint was the misunderstanding at the very end, when Naruto thought he'd been used and Sasuke wouldn't say anything back. It didn't make sense. Sasuke knew exactly what he wanted and was blunt about the fact that he loved Naruto and had been trying to get Naruto to fall for him for years. So why wouldn't he argue once Naruto started making accusations? I know he said he didn't know how to make Naruto believe in him, and it had to have hurt after such mind-blowing sex for Naruto to ask if it was just another game, but that's why he should have told Naruto he was wrong. Anything other than silence. When Naruto asked where they go from here, it was the perfect opportunity for him to say something and he didn't. I just don't see how someone in Sasuke's position would have stayed silent in that moment, left without saying a word, and then shown up again a full WEEK later. It surprises me that the roses (and song lyrics) fixed the problem. How was that the proof that Sasuke had learned how to love? Naruto could just as easily have accused him of trying to buy his love and not meaning his words the way he did before.

It must be very nice to work as models. if only sasuke was honest from the beginning, maybe he could get naruto more quickly.

well, the whole thing is hilarious and the fact that the games have been going on for years proves sasuke's patience in winning naruto's heart.

Im sooo amazed by all of your storys!

Every single one touchs me.

Youre really amazing.

Keep up your amazing work!

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i love it was soo cute to read

that's HOT and i'm glad it had a happy ending, i thought sasuke was being too much of a bitch :D

Wow, that was a very different fic; I don't think I've ever read a fic that was in past tense like this

It was rather strange, though I was also somehow beautiful and sweet!

Amazing fic!

Your writing style is definitely unique and I have to say I really enjoy it. This story was emotionally stimulating. Great job.

Pagan.

I liked this one, I really did. Naruto was strong person, and Sasuke was acting as if Naruto was the weaker one, he just didn't realise he needed Naruto more then Naruto needed him.

Their game was hot, Sasuke is a pervert, and I can't blame him for wanting Naruto.

awsome story. one of the best fanfics iv read. definately top 20

again very well written ur a very good author

so cute