I loved your story :)

OTFL "Screw your pancakes !"

I don't like it. I LOVE it!

It's so sweet and makes me feel fuzzy inside...

I'm faving it!

lol. I know this is my second comment. Or, review...thingy... ... Anyhoo, THIS WAS SO CUTE! Adorable! I love Zemyx! They're just so cute. Zexion's all emo, silent, and mysterious. And Demyx is friendly, loud, and open to any questions anyone asks. lol. My favorite part was probably when he was coming up with the song, or when he played the song for Zexy. ( "I can sing, baby. I can do it for you.") lol. Marly. ... Wow. This was a long comment-review-thing. ;

Poor Dem! What the hell is wrong with Zexy? Geez... And man... Marluxia sure does care about his pancakes... lol. I love it so far! w

Yep, loved it.

Thanks for the fanfic. There aren't enough Zemyx fanfics, and I was really happy to find this one. I believe I am going to read this fic many times after the first time, which was this time. Hope ya understood what I meant.

Blue

T.T SO CUTE! I loved it! Not exactly the best written thing in the world, but hey! It was sweet, and emotional, and I could tell you worked hard on it! Job well done!

hey i loved the story, but it was really short. demyx and zexy are the perfic couple. you had some bad wording in some paarts though, but all in all a very good short story.

so romantic! i love this! SQUEE! ZEXY AND DEMMY FOREVER! (69)

SQUE! Zemyx IS love and I luv Zemyx! I loved this story! 8D

Wow... as a random point, have you ever seen the movie Mulon Rouge? (I know I can't spell...) Because this fic for some reason made me think of the song Your Song while I was reading it. Seriously! If you haven't seen it, you should listen to the song. It fits this fic perfectly!

As for the fic itself, cute, sweet, and I

aw! Demy is gunna make a cute song for Zexy!

wait...wuh? So they're all dead?

lol. Axel, did you really need to ask that?

Axel: Yes

Larxene: Dam right!

Me: Shut up.

Larx: NEVER!

No! It's over... *sobs* I loved you're story, it was great! -