Reviews for Deseo Que Estuvieras Aquí
hyper13 chapter 1 . 2/13/2017
I love this. So much. You have such talent and I envy you 3
Wonderful job, as always.
hyper13 chapter 1 . 2/13/2017
I love this. So much. You have such talent and I envy you 3
Wonderful job, as always.
Rosy-Fingered-Dawn chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
Really liked it!

-Rosy
amyh52 chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Especially loved when they spoke their feelings in Spanish.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
My Spanish isn't amazing, but I want to suggest you change "chicas calientes" which means horny girls, to "chicas guapas" which means pretty or beautiful girls.

A lot of embarrassment and a trip to Mexico taught me that.
LeanneDaseyLover chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
That was adorable. I loved every bit of it. Great job.
SuperxXxGirl79 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
aw...that was sweet!
midnightjen chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
this was so cute.
BlackStar29 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
the slip cover was a great idea haha
Rachel Tamwood chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Really good story, I loved it.
monkey-monkey-underpants07 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Holy crap! u went above and beyond that prompt! this story was amazing! I loved it! totally great! funny, drama, dasey! my favorite things :D
SNN chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Dude, I totally loved this! It was really funny and awesome and I love how you kind of left it to us readers to let our imagination wander with the Dasey stuff.

Fantastic job! ]
Super Reader chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Very nice. Not like a mad make out fest but a very sweet piece of work. I'm thinking about doing the flashfics as well, they sound fun. :)
Xtremefaller8705 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
That was a great story. Great characterizations and one liners as usual. Would you ever consider turning this into a chapter story? It's so good I want it to go on. Just a thought.
visitor chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Wow. Sweet and simple. Just wow. And in character. Triple wow. Love and cookies,k.
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