oh god this is sad.

could you do me a favor?

please make an alternate ending to this.

please.

Oh God. I'm actually crying. Physically CRYING! That's actually a good song for a writer, believe it or not :) It's a sign of an extremely well writen fiction! Just one question: did TenTen kill herself, or did she just die from lack of nutrients and depression and stuff? Anyways, fantastic story, and will always be on my favorite list!

Aurgh! I knew you would probably knock Kankuro off, but I'm still sad :( Besides you killing off Kankuro, this is still an excellent Song Fic. No spelling/grammar mistakes that I caught or anything. Again, great job!

Ack! Almost crying. So sad...but happy ending! In a sense...I'm just wondering if this is what you had planned out the entire time, or if you just wanted to end this story and in doing so killed off both characters. Oh well...still great either way.

Okay...WOW! I knew it was coming but your writing still made me so sad! Over all your chapters are very well done and that last one was a panicle of emotions. Emotions which were show and express wonderfully.

~Mana

You're mean. You killed him. And then you killed her.

Still, as mean as that was, it was great to read. Sad, but beautifull.

this story is da bomb i love Kankuros personaliy how you wrote it. Update soon:)

AW! This is such a wonderfully adorable story, I can't even begin to explain how much I enjoy it! Please try to update soon!

Aww, me likey. Kankuro is so cute in this, and I like Tenten.

Hope to read more of this soon )

I like the story so far. You didn't go to crazy with the inner monologue always a plus. I like Kankuro's random thought. I kind of wish the dialogue would have been a little longer. Tenten got Kankuro's name in seconds, but I don't remember if she was conscious for Kankuro's fight. Was Temari the first fighter or Kankuro, not sure -.-;

Hmm, i would have also have liked to have actually seen him get a bit nervouse besides just thinking it. Give us a brief glimpse of what the scene looks like ( little things like , his face turned red as she laned in closer. He coughed and averted his eyes. Little things like that).

This is interesting and has a nice start. You've keept the characters mostly like themselves. please continue. This is a pairing I'

m curious about and you're doing well with both characters and their interaction. So, please do continue.

This is actually really good. I'm VERY happy whenever a new KankuTen comes out, and it makes me even HAPPIER when it's written well and written literately. I hope you continue this soon. Don't be offended if you receive only a few comments, because not many people read KankuTen's. I on the other hand,love KankuTen. So yay! Update soon please.

I love that song! Even if it is one of the saddest things ever! T-T Anyway I really liked it Kankuro and Tenten do looks cute together! Keep upp the good work!

~Mana