Reviews for Moving On & Returning
burnnotice chapter 5 . 5/14
update
supertuff chapter 6 . 8/9/2017
please update
Guardian of Valhalla chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
This is why fanfic fail because the stories that never completed because a person is too busy focusing on the couple and not the story
FF's Nightmare chapter 6 . 5/23/2011
awesome
Sasuke4Tenten chapter 6 . 2/27/2011
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Sasuke Rules All of You chapter 6 . 1/21/2010
You should have kept the story as Naruto/Tenten. It would have been much more believable than a little girl picking Naruto and Sakura as her new daddy and mommy and boom instant forgiveness from Naruto towards Sakura. That's just way to silly and makes Naruto look like a pathetic loser.
NarutoRocks21113043 chapter 6 . 1/16/2010
Woot! You know I was scared stiff there for a while that you wouldn't be coming back! Fortunately my fears were wrong and you whipped out a fantastic chapter giving the kind of start I wanted to everything, seriously this chapter was fantastic! I'm really glad your back and hope you continue to update! Thanks for posting!
icekrim91 chapter 6 . 1/16/2010
aw...so cute, i love the family chapter..so cute...go SAKUNARU!

yahoo! awesome, can't wait to read more from it soon..keep it coming
DharkStom28 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
nice job can't wait to see how this turn out update soon
The Mortal Enemy of Flying Fox chapter 6 . 1/12/2010
WARNING! If a reviewer by the name Flying Fox of the Snowy Mountains reviews your story, make sure to ignore it completely. This person is a really ignorant jerk and should be ban for his/hers disrespect towards author and their story.
Animaman chapter 6 . 1/12/2010
Good story, although its too bad you didn't poke fun on Jiraiya when you introduced Hikari.
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever. Yes you should put in lemons. Hopefully between Naruto and Sakura.
your friend chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
the story was amzing, you need to write more because i am deperate to find out
Sasuke4Tenten chapter 5 . 8/31/2009
Absolutly amazing! I LOVE this story! Hikiari sounds so adorable! SasuTen is my all time favourite couple and I'm glad you put them into this story. There arn't many stories about them :( NaruTen is kawaii too. 3 Naruto's so kind in this! Please, please make more stories about these couples.

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SSJ5gokurulez chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Cool!
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