Reviews for Moving On & Returning |
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burnnotice chapter 5 . 5/14 update |
supertuff chapter 6 . 8/9/2017 please update |
Guardian of Valhalla chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 This is why fanfic fail because the stories that never completed because a person is too busy focusing on the couple and not the story |
FF's Nightmare chapter 6 . 5/23/2011 awesome |
Sasuke4Tenten chapter 6 . 2/27/2011 Join DeviantART and share your SasuTen story with the growing fanbase! :D We even have our own exclusive group there. |
Sasuke Rules All of You chapter 6 . 1/21/2010 You should have kept the story as Naruto/Tenten. It would have been much more believable than a little girl picking Naruto and Sakura as her new daddy and mommy and boom instant forgiveness from Naruto towards Sakura. That's just way to silly and makes Naruto look like a pathetic loser. |
NarutoRocks21113043 chapter 6 . 1/16/2010 Woot! You know I was scared stiff there for a while that you wouldn't be coming back! Fortunately my fears were wrong and you whipped out a fantastic chapter giving the kind of start I wanted to everything, seriously this chapter was fantastic! I'm really glad your back and hope you continue to update! Thanks for posting! |
icekrim91 chapter 6 . 1/16/2010 aw...so cute, i love the family chapter..so cute...go SAKUNARU! yahoo! awesome, can't wait to read more from it soon..keep it coming |
DharkStom28 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010 nice job can't wait to see how this turn out update soon |
The Mortal Enemy of Flying Fox chapter 6 . 1/12/2010 WARNING! If a reviewer by the name Flying Fox of the Snowy Mountains reviews your story, make sure to ignore it completely. This person is a really ignorant jerk and should be ban for his/hers disrespect towards author and their story. |
Animaman chapter 6 . 1/12/2010 Good story, although its too bad you didn't poke fun on Jiraiya when you introduced Hikari. |
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010 This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever. Yes you should put in lemons. Hopefully between Naruto and Sakura. |
your friend chapter 5 . 12/31/2009 the story was amzing, you need to write more because i am deperate to find out |
Sasuke4Tenten chapter 5 . 8/31/2009 Absolutly amazing! I LOVE this story! Hikiari sounds so adorable! SasuTen is my all time favourite couple and I'm glad you put them into this story. There arn't many stories about them :( NaruTen is kawaii too. 3 Naruto's so kind in this! Please, please make more stories about these couples. x |
SSJ5gokurulez chapter 1 . 8/23/2009 Cool! |